Talk:2005 Macau Grand Prix

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Review: July 24, 2018. (Reviewed version).

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Latest comment: 5 years ago5 comments2 people in discussion

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 19:24, 24 July 2018 (UTC)Reply

Doing now. Courcelles (talk) 19:24, 24 July 2018 (UTC)Reply

"The 2005 Macau Grand Prix was the fifty-first running of the event " Um, nope, not according to the lead.
"was the sole representative" This could use work "Was the sole champion taking part" or something.
"Furthermore, the champion of the British Formula Three International Series Álvaro Parente had an A1GP commitment in Malaysia. " Appears unsourced
"Thus the highest placed participants from the Euro and British series' were Lucas di Grassi and Charlie Kimball. " Respectively could be added as the last word in this sentence
"an poor-handling car due to one of his wheels being buckled from the accident with Bamba." a) You don't need "an" here, and b) Where is this sourced?
"slow puncture" A slow puncture of what? His tire?
"But, on his second appearance in Macau" DOn't need this But.

Just minor things, really. Courcelles (talk) 20:15, 24 July 2018 (UTC)Reply

@Courcelles: Have addressed all of the points mentioned in the review. MWright96 (talk) 20:38, 24 July 2018 (UTC)Reply

Promoted. Courcelles (talk) 20:50, 24 July 2018 (UTC)Reply

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