Draft talk:X-Two J

Improvement

how best can X-Two J page be improved Kelvinnnah (talk) 18:13, 6 February 2023 (UTC)

@Kelvinnnah: If you want I could have a look through and make it better. Schminnte (talk • contribs) 18:16, 6 February 2023 (UTC)

I will appreciate it if you can . Thank you Kelvinnnah (talk) 19:47, 6 February 2023 (UTC)

I've done a bit of condensing and rewording. I'll put an AfC template on the page so you can submit whenever you want. Happy editing, Schminnte (talk • contribs) 22:16, 7 February 2023 (UTC)

Thank you for the response i have added another bit of information to the Wikipedia page of the artist X-two J I will appreciate a review and also to see if it can be improved. Kelvinnnah (talk) 07:27, 8 February 2023 (UTC)

please also review for more improvement added a new write up to the artist page Kelvinnnah (talk) 08:07, 8 February 2023 (UTC)

I see that you haven't added a reference to the newly added sections. Wikipedia really needs references for important information, so unless you can find a reference the best course of action may be to remove the early life and personal life sections. Schminnte (talk • contribs) 08:13, 8 February 2023 (UTC)

personal life and early life sections has been removed kindly review to see if i can go ahead to submit Kelvinnnah (talk) 20:41, 8 February 2023 (UTC)

I'd say that looks ok. I would say to be bold: submit now and hope for the best. All the best, Schminnte (talk • contribs) 20:47, 8 February 2023 (UTC)