Draft talk:Business Model Ontology
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Improve the draft of Business Model Ontology page edit
Could someone give me advice on what is there to look for to improve the page? ITFES (talk) 15:37, 2 September 2023 (UTC)
Copyright materials edit
I am trying to acquire consent to use some of the materials.
There are text overlaps with a book called Business Model Ontology and the copyright holder sent to the Wikipedia email confirmation for permission of use of texts and images. I will upload again the images of the File:The Industrial Cross arrows.png - Wikipedia, File:Industrial Cognition Tree.png - Wikipedia' and the File:Single and Set Management - hERP.png - Wikipedia and File:Operation in Real Time - hERP.png - Wikipedia related photos as they are from that book. If there are problems or objections, I will solve them.
- Ticket#2023101210004205 and Ticket#2023101210004214
About File:William Deming.jpg - Wikipedia, I directly asked the copyright holder - The Deming Institute, and they allowed me to use it for this article. I forwarded their email to Wikipedia permission email. If Wikipedia doesn't accept the permission, I can use the photo from W. Edwards Deming - Wikipedia as a backup solutions.
I am still waiting for response for the photo File:Oliver Wight (1930-1983).gif - Wikipedia. I might require assistance, because there are no photos of Oliver Wight in Wikipedia (or I didn't find any) and it is hard to find the author of the source.
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- Ticket#2023101210005946
I will upload a photo of Peter Bachvarov, that is not copyright material. It will be an original photo. Or leave it without a photo for the time being. I would like to here someone's suggestions.
Leonard Gauthier (talk) 13:36, 12 October 2023 (UTC)
Chapter reductions edit
The subchapter "Fourth engineering wave in the development of the fundamental scientific knowledge of economy" might be unnecessary long and story telling and essay like due to all the research I have done and my familiarity with the subject. It could be reduced and simplified by a lot.
I am not sure about the rest, so I would like to hear feedback for correction, or anyone can feel free to reduce segments or delete them if necessary.
Leonard Gauthier (talk) 13:48, 12 October 2023 (UTC)