Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/Wonder Boy in Monster Land

Wonder Boy in Monster Land edit

I just greatly expanded the article (almost 4x). I'd like a peer review to see if it reads OK, nothing is terribly redundant, etc. Note that I still have a couple of sources to add, yet, so I am not 100% on the expansion phase of the article. –MuZemike 17:24, 28 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I noticed the really easy stuff first (yay for laziness, right?)

The box art should probably use {{Vgboxart fur}} and be resized
There's something weird going on with the other image's rationale
The MEKA dragon bit in parenthesis should probably be turned into a note, similar to how you did with Blaster Master
I thought we didn't list JP dates in the infobox anymore, but I could be wrong

I'll take another look later at the prose. --Teancum

As far as the boxart image is concerned, I was considering replacing it with the arcade flyer or computer game version; see the talk page section on this, which I doubt will get much participation anyways. –MuZemike 14:47, 1 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I have the full text of the review from Dragon magazine; I will share upon request. BOZ (talk) 02:58, 2 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

You can email me a copy of the article if you wish. –MuZemike 07:59, 2 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Done! BOZ (talk) 12:29, 2 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Also, if anyone wishes to comment with regards to this proposal to switch out the box art, please comment either here or there; I would greatly appreciate that. –MuZemike 19:29, 3 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Per request I'll chime in here :D -- I'd say go with the original arcade flyer. Even though its only 222px wide it best represents the original release. Besides, all XBLA game covers are only 220px wide, and we just keep them at the original image size (see Hydro Thunder Hurricane) -- it looks fine. Still haven't taken a look at the prose, it's a lot to thumb through, but I'll try to get to it soon. --Teancum (talk) 18:15, 7 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]