Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/Crash Bandicoot (character)

Crash Bandicoot (character) edit

About one and three-quarter years ago, this article failed a Good Article nomination most likely due to lack of context on the character's conception and creation among other problems. Since then the said section has grown substantially in size, but I still wanted to get other opinions to make sure this article is ready for renomination; I don't want to make a fool of myself by nominating an article that doesn't deserve it for a second time. Cat's Tuxedo (talk) 16:42, 26 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by David Fuchs

Some openers:
- File:CrashBandicootLanding.jpg really doesn't meet NFCC. There's nothing contained in the shot that isn't illustrated satisfactorily in another frame or through text.
- There's comments on the design after Radical took over, but no mention of what the changes actually were, on a glance-through.

--Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs^(talk) 20:16, 26 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I've removed the violating image and made the critics' analysis on Crash's redesign more in-depth. Cat's Tuxedo (talk) 03:09, 27 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

What I meant was that the Conception section doesn't mention Crash's redesign, but the reception is calling attention to it. Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs^(talk) 16:45, 28 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

If it alleviates the situation in any way, I added a paragraph on the character's mascot status and design following the Naughty Dog titles. Cat's Tuxedo (talk) 19:31, 29 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

That's more along the lines of what I was thinking. I'll take another look when I can. Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs^(talk) 17:29, 5 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]