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01:11:01, 14 June 2019 review of submission by The Real XL83

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WHY YOU BULLY ME The Real XL83 (talk) 01:11, 14 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Wikipedia is not the place for you to advertise your youtube channel. Try facebook. GMGtalk 01:42, 14 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

02:04:07, 14 June 2019 review of submission by Tigereye7

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I spent a lot of time researching "independent, reliable, published sources" for this article and I am really struggling with the idea that someone says I wrote this like an advertisement. Every single sentence is verifiable from these sources. Is negativity required on Wikipedia? Someone please help me out here. Tigereye7 (talk) 02:04, 14 June 2019 (UTC) Tigereye7 (talk) 02:04, 14 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Tigereye7: DGG and I have both done some major editing to the draft recently. Please see the article's talk page for more guidance on what's still needed. Orville1974 (talk) 17:21, 15 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

08:08:48, 14 June 2019 review of submission by Velenkosini

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Velenkosini (talk) 08:08, 14 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft has no content. Theroadislong (talk) 12:50, 14 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

12:33:43, 14 June 2019 review of submission by Fejacs

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Initially i failed to include external links and references to back up my article. Fejacs (talk) 12:33, 14 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

No evidence to suggest he is notable "supplier of eggs to University of Nigeria, Enugu campus." confers no notability whatsoever! Theroadislong (talk) 12:49, 14 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

13:16:13, 14 June 2019 review of submission by Adeboa

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Hello please my article was rejected becuase i didnt put any references, i have put in credible and reliable references now and i hope it is good enough. Thank you for your time.

Adeboa (talk) 13:16, 14 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]


13:35:07, 14 June 2019 review of submission by Adeboa

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i added the references. it was declined the first time because i didnt add any references, i have then added credible and reliable references to the article.

Adeboa (talk) 13:35, 14 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]


14:41:10, 14 June 2019 review of submission by Muneeralsenaidi

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14:51:02, 14 June 2019 review of submission by Muneeralsenaidi

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Muneeralsenaidi (talk) 14:51, 14 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]


14:52:39, 14 June 2019 review of submission by Muneeralsenaidi

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why is my article getting rejected Muneeralsenaidi (talk) 14:52, 14 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Muneeralsenaidi. User:Muneeralsenaidi/sandbox has been rejected because it is full of promotional marketing-speak, and the only source it cites is the company itself. Wikipedia may not be used to advertise or promote anything. Articles should be written from a neutral point of view and be based mainly on independent sources.
Creating a new article is one of the most difficult, time consuming, and frustrating tasks a novice editor can attempt. I strongly suggest that you build some experience with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines by making small improvements to existing articles for a while, before again attempting to write an article from scratch. See Wikipedia:Community portal or Wikipedia:WikiProject Architecture if you aren't sure where to start. --Worldbruce (talk) 15:23, 14 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

16:24:32, 14 June 2019 review of draft by DondeEstaElBurro?

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changing title of draft DondeEstaElBurro? (talk) 16:24, 14 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I'd like to change the title of my draft from Boston Smallpox Epidemic of 1721 to 1721 Boston smallpox epidemic. How could that be done without having to create a second article?

@DondeEstaElBurro?: see WP:MOVE. --Worldbruce (talk) 21:25, 14 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

16:49:40, 14 June 2019 review of submission by Muneeralsenaidi

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Im trying to publish my firm info by it still keeps getting reqected Muneeralsenaidi (talk) 16:49, 14 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]


16:50:27, 14 June 2019 review of submission by Muneeralsenaidi

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Muneeralsenaidi (talk) 16:50, 14 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

STLArchitects[edit source]


STLarchitects Logo STLarchitects is an architecture and urban design firm that was founded in 1996 in Chicago, Illinois. The projects in which are designed are being built all around the US, Europe and Asia. Its work is set on creating diverse work ranging from master plans to small cultural centers and large educational facilities to compact private schools.Stlarchitects design and work operated by 20 international architects and designers, thriving in an open and communicative atmosphere which favors vibrant exchange of ideas and emphasizes interdisciplinary teamwork over individual expression.

17:40:29, 14 June 2019 review of submission by Electricsity

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I added new sources to provide more evidence for notability. I would like for someone to review and provide further feedback to improve it. Electricsity (talk) 17:40, 14 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Electricsity. The company is not notable. Most businesses aren't, see WP:BFAQ#COMPANY. You're wasting your time trying to improve the draft, because no amount of editing will make it acceptable. How you spend your time is of course your own business, but don't expect volunteers to expend any more effort on it. --Worldbruce (talk) 23:12, 14 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

18:50:57, 14 June 2019 review of draft by Sroth0616

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How can I make it seem less like an and more like something interesting to read? (PS: I also couldn't title external ref correctly so, there is no title.)

Sroth0616 (talk) 18:50, 14 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

HI Sroth0616, you need to show why Blackstone is important enough to have a wikipedia article. Wikipedia isn't just a phone book where every company gets an entry, so you have to prove notability by providing independent, third party sources who are discussing the importance of the laboratory in some detail. Nolelover (talk) 16:14, 18 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

18:58:13, 14 June 2019 review of submission by 2600:1702:C40:A2F0:2BB:60FF:FE61:1ED5

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2600:1702:C40:A2F0:2BB:60FF:FE61:1ED5 (talk) 18:58, 14 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]


19:06:54, 14 June 2019 review of submission by Nadirah01

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Harith bin al-Shākir or Harith bin Amr bin Shakir was among the companions of Imam al-Husain the Grandson of Prophet of Islam and the martyrs of Karbala. He was from Banu Shakir clan of the great Banu Hamdan tribe. He was among the famous people of Kufa. It is reported that he was a wealthy Person and powerful in speaking person and a great merchant in Kufa Nadirah01 (talk) 19:06, 14 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]


Request on 19:12:34, 14 June 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by RyanNewman20

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Hi I wanted to know why my article was denied, thank you in advance. It was titled Fantasy Point Elasticity, by myself RyanNewman20

RyanNewman20 (talk) 19:12, 14 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

It lacks any independent reliable secondary sources and has no indication of why the subject is notable. Theroadislong (talk) 20:11, 14 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

19:36:41, 14 June 2019 review of draft by LLcentury

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I don't know why references 14, 22, 48 and 87 appear that way when I've done the correct thing or at least I think so. Thank you. Kindest regards.

LLcentury (talk) 19:36, 14 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hi LLcentury. Spaces strayed into the URLs of those four references, which made them display and behave oddly. I've fixed those four, but there may be others. Did you copy this from es:Política externa del gobierno de Shinzō Abe? You are welcome to do so, but must give attribution to the original authors. See WP:TFOLWP for how. --Worldbruce (talk) 22:59, 14 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Worldbruce Thank you so much, but believe me please in good faith, I lack of technical English and dont understand how to attribute the authorship to User:Jeddah. I already put something on the draft talk page. --LLcentury (talk) 00:21, 15 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]
@Worldbruce: LLcentury is not fluent in English, and interpreted your request as a request to attribute the article creator (User:Jeddah). There is an attribution on the talk page to the original article. Jeddah created the original article, but other people have edited/improved the article; it would be a bit tedious to attribute each and every person. Perhaps LLcentury didn't understand the request; I'm just conveying what they interpreted.
After this is cleared up, we should get back to the original question.  I dream of horses (My talk page) (My edits) @ 00:54, 15 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]
I've repaired the insufficient attribution for LLcentury as described in WP:RIA. --Worldbruce (talk) 02:13, 15 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Worldbruce: Thank you!, do you need me to do something more to attribution? Kindest regards --LLcentury (talk) 02:19, 15 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@LLcentury: The attribution is OK now. --Worldbruce (talk) 03:19, 15 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

20:24:39, 14 June 2019 review of submission by 196.126.37.62

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Sumbit this draft. All sources was cited. it's an English translation of the French article :

https://fr.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ian_Foote

196.126.37.62 (talk) 20:24, 14 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

20:37:32, 14 June 2019 review of submission by Muneeralsenaidi

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this is my 6 time trying to publish why cant I?? Muneeralsenaidi (talk) 20:37, 14 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

You have been told repeatedly that the topic is not notable. Theroadislong (talk) 20:56, 14 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

21:51:25, 14 June 2019 review of submission by Rhetoric84

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Rhetoric84 (talk) 21:51, 14 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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