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Request on 01:21:05, 10 September 2018 for assistance on AfC submission by 137.119.141.90

• 137.119.141.90 (talk · contribs)
  • Draft:YungShrugga (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

137.119.141.90 (talk) 01:21, 10 September 2018 (UTC)

03:49:18, 10 September 2018 review of draft by Sharath RK Teja

• Sharath RK Teja (talk · contribs)
  • Draft:Grptalk (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Sharath RK Teja (talk) 03:49, 10 September 2018 (UTC)

Can you please point out the parts of the article that sounds promotional, so that I can improve it?

 On hold pending paid editing disclosure, see User talk:Sharath RK Teja#Declare any connection. --Worldbruce (talk) 04:27, 10 September 2018 (UTC)

Thank you for your declaration, Sharath RK Teja. I see that Draft:Grptalk has been deleted for being unambiguous advertising or promotion. So the short answer to your question about which parts is "all parts". See WP:BFAQ#COMPANY for an explanation of why it's a bad idea for a company to try to write an encyclopedia article about themselves, and what the alternatives are. --Worldbruce (talk) 16:41, 11 September 2018 (UTC)

14:59:15, 10 September 2018 review of draft by Navysaylorgirl

• Navysaylorgirl (talk · contribs)
  • Draft:Matthew Proman (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Navysaylorgirl (talk) 14:59, 10 September 2018 (UTC)

I'm not how to resolve some of the original editor's comments. We had an exchange back when I originally wrote this, and he offered some advice, but now I can't find that page, and it looks like he is taking a break from Wiki. I haven't been paid to write this, so I really don't know what to do about that. Can someone offer some suggestions on more neutral language to use to make this less "overly positive"? I'd really like to get this posted in some form. T/Y

@Navysaylorgirl: The user is not inactive, they just edited an hour and a half ago, see Special:Contributions/Cameron11598. JTP ^{(talk • contribs)} 18:15, 10 September 2018 (UTC)