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21:25:38, 31 July 2016 review of submission by RobbieIanMorrison

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Hello AfC helpdesk. My draft article was rejected for being too essay-like, but no further explanation was given. Could someone review the draft and suggest ways in which it could be improved and made more acceptable. I would be very grateful for that. Kind regards. RobbieIanMorrison (talk) 21:25, 31 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]