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01:42:25, 10 August 2014 review of draft by IllusionPictures

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I've submitted the following article, but for some reason it was not accepted for review? Maybe a format issue?

Here is the article:

UK, 1984 Director: Nathaniel Gutman Writers: Mira Lobe (Novel) | Hanan Peled (Screenplay) Producer: Elisabeth Wolters-Alfs Composer: Hennie Bekker Cinematographer: Amnon Salomon Editors: John Adelaar | Thekla Bauer | Jurgen Boettcher | Wolf Kayser


Timothy Stark – Tommy (Frankenstein) Stefan Gates – Stanley (The Wright Stuff) J.D. Roth – William (The Biggest Loser) George Montgomery – The President (Battle of the Bulge) Richard Haines – Mr. Grant (Alien from L.A.) Roger Charteris – Oliver (Citadel) Paul Lockwood – (John and Yoko: A Love Story) Jason Norman – (Escape from Sobibor) Sophie Camara – Diana Joanna Rowlands – (Armageddon: The Final Challenge) Roslyn McNamara Christine van den Berg Martin Bernstein Kevin Greetham – (A Far Off Place) Audrey Stark – Mom Nicholas Lorentz – (Kickboxer 5) Clare Marshall – (Wah-Wah) Julie Marshall – Jonathan Taylor – Spud (Skin) Patricia Sanders – Pat Sanders (Taxi!) Peter Tunstall – (The Gods Must Be Crazy II) David Abbott – (Lovers and Friends/For Richer, for Poorer) Ronald France - (The Fall) Dermod Judge – (Stompie and the Red Tide)

https://pro-labs.imdb.com/title/tt0295903/?ref_=sch_int

https://www.facebook.com/pages/Childrens-Island/1459626957623062?ref=hl

http://www.rottentomatoes.com/m/childrens_island/

IllusionPictures (talk) 01:42, 10 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

@IllusionPictures:   Declined It doesn't meet our criteria for fiction, which includes television. You need to add more independent reliable sources to make a case for notability. Yes, I would also fix the formatting and change your username. Chris Troutman (talk) 02:10, 10 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

04:16:14, 10 August 2014 review of submission by Swamisharnanandjimaharaj

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04:16:14, 10 August 2014 request for review by Swamisharnanandjimaharaj


Swamisharnanandjimaharaj (talk) 04:16, 10 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]


Have added the citation as required, thus requesting for a rereviw.

  Declined A great deal of work is required to cut out the promotional aspects and reflect only that material verified in WP:RS. Fiddle Faddle 09:03, 10 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

09:28:08, 10 August 2014 review of submission by Zinfandelorganic

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I would like to know if (and how) I can upload an image or images to my article whilst it is under review? Thanks

Zinfandelorganic (talk) 09:28, 10 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

New editors are in a kind of limbo when they must await the expiry of certain gating factors prior to being able to upload and include images. Once those expire you may upload images that are suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia, or, more usefully, in Commons
The article is in a state at present where it has been   Declined and a comment has been left on it detailing the reason. There is substantial work to do without getting distracted with picture addition. This is the time to go for substance, not decoration. Fiddle Faddle 11:44, 10 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

16:28:01, 10 August 2014 review of submission by Vfleish

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This is my first time creating a wikipedia article, and I am having some trouble formatting the citations correctly. Things like "ignored" are coming up and I'm not sure why. I just need a bit of guidance please!

Vfleish (talk) 16:28, 10 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I have handled almost all of the errors for you. You had omitted the parameter name url= before the http string. One problem remains with a missing title= parameter name, but this is to facebook so is unlikely to be a suitable reference. You also have a direct reference to "amazon.com/gp/product/1611686032/ref=as_li_tl?ie=UTF8&camp=1789&creative=390957&creativeASIN=1611686032&linkCode=as2&tag= " which is blacklisted. If it is a book use {{Cite book}} and note that the isbn= parameter comes into its own here. We do not ever link directluy to sales sites. Fiddle Faddle 16:37, 10 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
I have, by the way, commented this reference out so I could save my work. That is the <!-- some text or other --> syntax inside your draft. Fiddle Faddle 16:41, 10 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
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