Wikipedia:Portal peer review/Yorkshire/archive2

Portal:Yorkshire edit

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I am requesting a peer review because I wish to get Yorkshire up to Featured Portal status. It currently has 11 DYK sets, 3 lists (all featured), 18 biographies (13 of which are Good or Featured), and 25 selected articles (all Good or Featured). Gilderien Chat|List of good deeds 19:50, 19 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Very nice; here are my thoughts:
  1. In the "selected biography" section, some pictures are on the right and some are on the left. They should probably all be on the same side.
  2. In both the "selected article" and "selected biography" sections, the article title (in bold) should be linked, so the reader doesn't have to search for the "Read more" link.
  3. The "selected list" section has only 3 lists. I think you should either add more (they don't need to be featured, just high-quality) or remove the section.
  4. The shortcut is in a somewhat awkward place, right next to the flag. Maybe move it next to the "Show new selections" link?
  5. There's too much empty space between the intro and the selections.
  6. Per WP:LINKCLARITY, "Northern England" should be only one link, to the article Northern England. England is linked later in the intro.
Good job and good luck! -- Ypnypn (talk) 00:56, 28 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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