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Portal:Terrorism edit

Statistics: Three rotating images in the Intro, 15 Selected articles, all GA-class or FA-class, 10 Selected biographies, all GA-class or FA-class, 20 Selected pictures, 20 sets of 3 DYK hooks, all with free-use images, 20 Selected quotes, all with free-use images, and a Rotating In this month section.

Looking for any feedback/comments prior to WP:FPORTC. Thanks, -- Cirt (talk) 15:03, 17 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Notified: Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Politics, Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Sociology, Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Terrorism, Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Crime and Criminal Biography, Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Military history. -- Cirt (talk) 15:00, 17 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Comment. It's a well-put-together portal with a clean layout and adequate amount of content. I was particularly interested in the "In this month" feature, and hope that this could be extended in future. I have one major concern with regard to featuring this -- your intro states that there is no clear definition of terrorism, so it's not clear what exactly is in the purview of the portal, and this becomes particularly obvious in the biography section. The inclusion of, for example, Idi Armin was unclear to me under the definition commonly used within the UK (which would exclude government actions), and perhaps needs to be more clearly justified within the blurb. I'm not sure including military people involved in the "war on terror" such as Michael Patrick Murphy is sensible. Also the blurb for George W Bush should focus on his views/actions regarding terrorism.

My other comments are minor. Some Selected Article blurbs need to be edited to be closer to the average length -- eg R v Thomas, The CIA and September 11, & Real IRA are very short, World Trade Center is rather long. Also big variation in the Selected Biographies & Pictures. Probably because of this, the column balance seems way off for many selections (much longer on the right). The blurbs could in several cases do with a copy edit.

The import from Wikinews doesn't seem to be picking up very much -- it might be better to add items by hand? Or delete altogether if this can't be maintained.

The instructions need personalising to this portal -- in at least one place they refer to "Buddhism justice" (DYKs). Also you don't have instructions for suggestions for "In this month".

The layout might perhaps be improved by reducing the number of 2-col boxes at the end.

Hope this is of use to you in improving this portal! Espresso Addict (talk) 21:39, 3 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Response to Espresso Addict

I generally like to keep the text as is, from the WP:LEAD that it was imported from. Otherwise, it could be seen as arbitrarily selective text choice on the part of the editor, as opposed to the stable lede version from the article itself. Therefore, if changes should be made, they should be done, at the lede of the article itself, Terrorism.
The biographies selected are done not for implication of anything at all, merely due to relevance to or within the topic, broadly defined. This would of course include those both involved in instigating terrorism, fighting against terror, law enforcement, military, etc.
Okay, might be best to remove the Wikinews section, will think about that suggestion some more or perhaps find other ways to improve it.
I will work on fixing the instructions, thanks for the recommendation.

-- Cirt (talk) 00:05, 4 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

"Otherwise, it could be seen as arbitrarily selective text choice on the part of the editor, as opposed to the stable lede version from the article itself." That's interesting. I've always written the blurb essentially from scratch to match the needs of the portal, based on the whole of the article. Espresso Addict (talk) 00:24, 4 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Oh no, I specifically avoid that type of construction. I always use the WP:LEAD text of the article itself. If the article is not adequate of a satisfactory level of quality, I just don't use that article in that portal. This makes things much easier - for example: it completely avoids any disputes or conflict over what is appropriate blurb text, because those debates should be on the talk page of the article, and not get shifted into two places and be both the purview of the portal talk page and article talk page simultaneously. Hope that makes things clear. :) -- Cirt (talk) 00:26, 4 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Clear certainly, but I strongly disagree. However this isn't the forum for discussing it. Espresso Addict (talk) 00:30, 4 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Agreed - Yeah, that would best be a discussion for another time and place. -- Cirt (talk) 00:31, 4 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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Portal:Speculative fiction edit

I've greatly improved this portal over the last 2-3 months. I initially created it way back in October 2005, but was unsuccessful in getting things rolling then. As I was really new on the site then, I had difficulty figuring out how to do things and so the portal remained mostly unchanged over the next four years or so. I'd generally like feedback on everything. I created the portal logo to make it a little more attractive that it was previously, and I'm willing to entertain critique of it, as well. I'd like to get the portal to featured status eventually. Thank you for your time in helping out here. ···日本穣^? · 投稿 · Talk to Nihonjoe 07:01, 25 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I don't usually do reviews of anything, articles or portals, so my comments may not be very helpful ;) I really like the whole look of the portal, it's very captivating. Having the tabs to the main genres right at the top is also a good idea. In the people section there are lists like the manga artists and women comics artists that aren't directly related to just speculative fiction, but I understand the reasoning for including them. The only major problem I see is in the Publications section that is missing links to lists of publications or categories of publications. –Cattus ^talk 16:33, 25 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Your comments are very useful. I've added two sections to the Publications tab. Does that look better now? As for the manga artists and women comic artists, yeah, there aren't any lists of those here that are split out by genre since most of them seem to work in multiple genres (Rumiko Takahashi, for example, works in fantasy, science fiction/alternate history, contemporary (as in "no speculative fiction at all"), and horror). Thanks for your time. ···日本穣^? · 投稿 · Talk to Nihonjoe 17:49, 25 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, that's what was missing. You're right, comics creators seem to work on many different genres in a way that makes it hard to classify them that way.–Cattus ^talk 18:17, 25 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Any other comments or suggestions? I just redid the topics at the bottom of each of the tabs so they would look more like part of the portal. ···日本穣^? · 投稿 · Talk to Nihonjoe 19:08, 25 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Cattus pretty much covered my thoughts and the changes you've made since look great. I'm wondering (and I'm still pretty new to wiki editing so this is truly a question); would it be good to make the "speculative fiction topics" near the bottom collapsible? They seem "roomy" but that may be fine. Like I said, I'm new. Millahnna (mouse)talk 20:57, 25 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

They are definitely "roomy", though none of the other portals I've seen have them collapsed. I think it's not too big, and it is also at the bottom, so having it expanded like that shouldn't be too bad. Thanks for the comments. ···日本穣^? · 投稿 · Talk to Nihonjoe 22:26, 25 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

This is looking really good, I like the colour scheme and the logo you've designed. I also like the tab system at the top, and the releases & news section. I think some of the article summaries may be a little bit too long; Wikipedia:Featured portal criteria suggests no more than 200 words. Also, I think it would be good (I don't know if this generally looked for or not) to have an easy way for people to make suggestions for selected articles - maybe a link next to the "archive" link on each one. I don't know if you have room, but it might be nice to have a "selected picture" section - but I don't know what pictures there are available, so that would depend on what there is. This is a pretty huge topic, so well done in putting together such a coherent & interesting portal! --Beloved Freak 16:21, 26 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the comments! I would like to have a featured/selected picture section, but (given the nature of the topic) there aren't really many available for this topic unless I go with completely classical images (paintings and such from 100+ years ago). I'll see what I can do about the length of the summaries. I tried to keep them fairly small, but still large enough to be interesting. 200 words is really tiny, all things considered (your paragraph, minus your sig, is 146 words, so 54 more and it would be 200).

For having a place where people can suggest articles...I'm not sure how that would work. I'm not sure where I'd point them to suggest the articles, either. Any ideas? Thanks again for your time. ···日本穣^? · 投稿 · Talk to Nihonjoe 19:54, 26 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Yeah, I know it's pretty small. As far as suggesting articles, I didn't really look hard enough at what you already have on your article archive pages, and what you have is enough I think, as you have instructions on how to add another article. I've been trying to make instructions at Portal:Tanzania (Portal:Tanzania/Featured_article#Nominations) more with an view to instructing people who want to make a suggestion but aren't really experienced with Wikipedia or portal editing. But that might be overkill, I don't know. Yours is fine I think. Maybe you could add the word "nominations" or something to the archive link? (à la Portal:Barack Obama) I've run out of suggestions now! Nothing jumps out at me, but I'll have another look.--Beloved Freak 21:06, 26 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, I added the nomination link to the template used for that, so it should show up the next time you reload the page. Does that work? Nice idea, too. ···日本穣^? · 投稿 · Talk to Nihonjoe 23:09, 26 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Yeah, that looks good.--Beloved Freak 23:16, 26 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thought of another little nitpick. In the anniversaries section, there seems to be some inconsistent linking. There's overlinking, in my opinion, of some words like nationalities. I don't think "American" needs linking at all. If you do decide to link it though, it's not consistent at the moment, some instances are linked, some are not. Also, links like "science fiction" and "horror" - do you need to link those at all, given the sections you have on each? If you do keep them, I'd just link the first occurrence for each date. Do "televeision" and "film" need linking?--Beloved Freak 11:33, 27 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Those are mostly just copied from the first lines of the articles, and the articles are inconsistent about how they link. I'll be going back through them once I have all the redlinked dates completed in order to remove excess links. ···日本穣^? · 投稿 · Talk to Nihonjoe 17:45, 27 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The portal seems very nicely laid out and visually appealing - you clearly have done a great job in putting it together. However, it seems to me that there may be a significant mismatch between the structure and the content. Specifically, the portal is called Speculative Fiction, a term that is strongly associated with the written literature of books, a fact emphasized by the prominent display of a quill in the portal artwork. However, the planned content seems to be strongly skewed towards movies, television shows and games. If the main focus of the portal is to be science fiction/fantasy/horror media and games, then the portal should be given some other name. But if the portal is in truth a portal for Speculative Fiction, then the portal content should be primarily concerned with the written literature of speculative fiction. --BehemothCat (talk) 00:38, 30 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I'm sorry for any confusion, but speculative fiction covers more than just books. Also, I'm having trouble finding featured articles on books. If you know of any, please let me know and I'll be happy to add them. And since I made the logo, I can tell you that I was not trying to emphasize literature specifically. I appreciate the feedback, though. ···日本穣^? · 投稿 · Talk to Nihonjoe 00:54, 30 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

For example, here are links to catscans showing featured articles which are in Category:Science fiction novels [1], Category:Fantasy novels [2], and Category:Horror novels [3]. Not too many of them. ···日本穣^? · 投稿 · Talk to Nihonjoe 01:07, 30 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

While it's certainly possible to make the case that speculative fiction stretches far enough to encompass various non-literary works, it is clear that the term primarily refers to written literature. Wikipedia's speculative fiction article discusses the phrase solely in terms of written literature. The lead-in sentence of the article defines the term as "a fiction genre", while fiction is in turn defined as "a branch of literature". The Internet Speculative Fiction Database linked to by the article concerns itself solely with written works of literature. Another article link is to Dictionary citations for the term "speculative fiction". These citations were prepared for the authoritative Oxford English Dictionary, and again, all of them indicate that the term refers to written literature. This evidence strongly and unambiguously shows that the term Speculative Fiction refers primarily to written literature.

As to the logo, the fact you didn't intend for the the quill in the logo to emphasize literature doesn't really matter - when people, unaware of your intent, see a quill, they will think of written works. If, say, a projector and a joystick were included in the logo instead of the quill, the logo would then better represent the current planned content of the portal.

If you'd like to build a Portal that is mainly concerned with science fiction/fantasy/horror media and games, that's fine, but it should use some other name. The perceived scarcity of featured articles meeting the criteria of the portal shouldn't govern (or even influence) the portal content. Not all content has to be featured article quality - it's likely that there are plenty of suitable articles that could be used.

I hope that you don't think that I'm trying to rain on your parade - I really like the look of what you've done, and appreciate the work that went into it. It's simply that I feel that the portal as currently structured doesn't deliver what it purports to deliver. --BehemothCat (talk) 06:02, 30 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Well, I guess we'll just have to disagree. The article we have is wrong if it's stating it only refers to written works, and the definition you give of "fiction" is far too narrow; every science fiction, fantasy, and horror film or game is "a work of fiction", and most even include a statement to that effect. If our article states "fiction" only applies to literature, then it is blatantly wrong and still stuck in the 19th century.

Additionally, literature is hardly the only repository of speculative fiction. The phrase is used in countless magazines and academic papers (I've helped run a speculative fiction academic symposium for the last 20 years) to refer to science fiction, fantasy, and horror regardless of media.

My intent for the logo does matter, and I've changed it to show that it applies to more than just written materials. I'm designing a portal to cover all of them, not just games, TV, and movies (as you seem to be insisting I'm doing). All of them: books, movies, TV, games, and anything else which is science fiction, fantasy, or horror fiction works. Insisting it doesn't and can't cover more than just written works is academic snobbery. I'm sorry if this comes off as harsh, and I'm not attacking you personally, but this is the kind of thinking which turns off people interested in only one of the speculative fiction genres. As they are so closely related, there is absolutely no reason to limit it to just science fiction or just fantasy or just horror, nor is there any reason to limit it to just literature or just media and games. There is so much cross-pollination between them that to try to do so would be pointless.

Again, I apologize if my comments come off as harsh, but this is a sore point and very closely connected to traditional literature buffs turning up their noses at speculative fiction because they think it's not worthy of their time or notice. Now a similar argument appears to be being applied to speculative fiction films, television and games just because their creators chose a different medium with which to tell their fanciful tales. I really do appreciate your feedback here, but your comments are missing the intent of this portal.

Regarding the inclusion of more than featured articles, I agree there are probably some good and B-class articles out there which would be good to add. However, I'm working on adding just the featured articles right now. Since I'm the only one working on it, those articles will have to wait until I work my way through the FA set and add all of those. Once I have, I'll move on to GA and B articles. I don't think it would be effective to add any assessed at a lower quality, however. If you know of any GA or B-class articles you think should be added, feel free to post them here. ···日本穣^? · 投稿 · Talk to Nihonjoe 08:29, 30 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Well, I've expanded the number of selected articles to include 48 biographies (mostly authors), 21 science fiction works (mostly books), 5 fantasy works (this will be expanded a lot more), 9 horror works (this will be expanded), 11 publications, 78 DYKs, and there are only 83 redlink dates left in Anniversaries. So, a fair number of items. I want to get at least 20 works in each type in order to give a good variety. ···日本穣^? · 投稿 · Talk to Nihonjoe 09:08, 2 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Would anyone else like to offer any comments? Anyone who has already commented who would like to offer additional comments? I's significantly increased the number of literary works in the "random" works section of the portal (addressing a concern from BehemothCat), as well as adding more authors to the profiles "random" component (most of them will be authors anyway, as they are more likely to be directly related to this topic). I appreciate all the comment so far. ···日本穣^? · 投稿 · Talk to Nihonjoe 10:08, 8 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Joe, I'm afraid don't have much to offer in the way of criticism, but thought I'd comment. I've just had another look, and I think it's looking really good. I'm very impressed (and a little jealous...) of the number of articles you are featuring in each section. I think that's great and makes for the kind of portal that people will want to revisit.

I've just been in your DYK section, ready to complain that there are only 10, not the claimed 78... and then I scrolled down the page! In the meantime, I clicked on red link Portal:Speculative fiction/Did you know/11, and I love the instruction notice! What a great idea! How do you do that by the way? I'm starting to sound like your portal's biggest fan, so I'll mention the only two things I could think of. Firstly, and this is probably more a reflection of how my brain works than anything else, I'm not too sure about the image in the "horror" section. I mean, I just don't find it that scary or horrifying. At very first glance, it seemed more sci-fi to me, just because of the green colour. And then, I don't know, it seems a bit light hearted, a bit scooby doo-ish? I was expecting something either more gory, or something more ghostly. As I say, that might just be me...

The only other thing was that when you click onto the "people" section, after the other sections it seems, at first glance, a bit bare. There's a lot of white space there, that may not grab the casual browser. I would maybe swap the list section with the profile section so that there's more text, and potentially an image, right at the top.

Just thought of a third thing; #5 of the criteria suggests linking to other Wikimedia projects where relevant. Do you have any of those? Is there a relevant page or category on commons you could link to? I imagine some of the other projects might have relevant pages or topics, either to do with speculative fiction, or specifically horror, sci-fi etc. Anyway, that's all I can think of so I'll stop rambling. I think you should definitely take it to WP:FPOC.--Beloved Freak 11:07, 8 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the comments. The instruction notice is placed by using the "Group notice Page notice" links (in this case, the "Group notice" link) pages. This shows up when anyone edits any page in the portal, so I thought it would be useful to place those instructional notices there for easy access.

I agree with you on the Horror section image. I used it mainly because it was used in the Horror fiction template. I've changed it to an image of a zombie. If you know of a better image, feel free to suggest it.

I added an image to the People section. The way things are currently set up, it would be difficult to put the random bio section in place of the intro (and also defeat the purpose of having an intro). If you have an idea for a better image for this section, please suggest it.

I've added a "Related portals" box at the bottom of each of the tabs in the portal. How does that work? There was already one of these at the bottom of the main portal page. ···日本穣^? · 投稿 · Talk to Nihonjoe 01:21, 9 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Much better horror image! I see what you mean about the People section, but it looks better with an image. The related portals links look good - I like how they're different for each tab. No more suggestions!--Beloved Freak 10:28, 9 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

If anyone is still paying attention to this peer review, I've now added a randomized "Selected picture" section using speculative fiction-related images from the Picture of the day. ···日本穣^? · 投稿 · Talk to Nihonjoe 20:29, 28 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

(looking round) Er... just me then? Pictures look good. Are you going to nominate it for Featured Portal? I personally can't see anything left to sort out on it. Unfortunately this section of Peer Review seems a little deserted. --Beloved Freak 22:05, 30 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for hanging in there. :) I have a few more redlink dates at Portal:Speculative fiction/Anniversaries to bluelinkify before I do that. Once I have those, however, I think I will nominate it. It's been a lot of work. ···日本穣^? · 投稿 · Talk to Nihonjoe 23:38, 30 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I just added two more sections: a randomized "Possible futures" section (on the left, culled from the 22nd Century and related articles) and an "Upcoming conventions" section (on the right). Thoughts? ···日本穣^? · 投稿 · Talk to Nihonjoe 23:33, 4 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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Portal:Northwest Territories edit

Hi! I hope to take this portal to Featured portals sometime in the near future, so all comments (constructive of course :) ) are appreciated. JulieSpaulding (talk) 13:29, 19 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Where has the selected picture gone, none?? --Extra999 (Contact ^me + _contribs) 16:27, 26 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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Portal:Volcanoes edit

I've been doing lots of work on this one lately, and I want to jump from a PPR straight into a FPOC. The experience was fun. I'm a first-timer, so...Res Mar 03:22, 9 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

It would help to post some notices at Talk:Volcano and talk pages of relevant WikiProjects. Cirt (talk) 07:39, 12 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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Portal:Kansas edit

I'm hoping to get this portal to featured status, and the featured portal candidates page suggested this as the first step. Any and all advice on getting this portal to featured status would be appreciated. Ks0stm ^(T•C•G) 05:58, 28 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

We had too many people gaming the featured portal system by maintaining the portal only until the portal gained featured status. Right after that, they achieved their goals and no longer maintain it. This is why I suggest you to implement rotating contents. OhanaUnited^{Talk page} 07:06, 28 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I don't have a tremendous amount of experience with portals...how do I implement rotating contents? Ks0stm ^(T•C•G) 07:14, 28 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Simple. You use the {{Random portal component}} template. Use |header=<header> for the title (for example, selected article), |subpage=<subpage of content>, |max=<max # of content> (for example 6 different featured images), and |seed=<seed> if you want to bias it to a particular result. Automatically works with boxheader/boxfooter templates and gives totally random results. For example, Featured pictures are located at Portal:Portal/Featured pictures, and are based on Portal:Portal/Featured pictures/Layout. Let's say there are 7 of them, up to Portal:Portal/Featured pictures/7. Then max=7, subpage=Featured picture, header=Selected picture. ResMar 03:42, 9 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I found that the portal already used the random component template, so I just went ahead and added more content to the subpages. Ks0stm ^(T•C•G) 18:29, 9 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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Portal:Aboriginal peoples in Canada edit

Well since there is only one level Of Feature so do this first i guess....Like the guy below my first portal to!! So just hoping to get so feed back if How i did it is ok!! Buzzzsherman (talk) 06:07, 6 December 2009 (UTC) Buzzzsherman (talk) 06:07, 6 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

OK, my comments from complete inexperience! I freely confess that I've pinched ideas from elsewhere, particularly the latest Featured Portal (Portal:Nevada), as that gives a very good model to work from.

I think you can remove the references from the introduction – there's no reference list (nor should there be), so readers are left with annoying numbers that don't mean anything and don't link anywhere. You can also remove the references from the selected articles.
The introduction is rather long - can it be trimmed? From what I can see in Featured Portals, the tendency is to have a summary that entices people to read on, with a more... link at the end of the summary.
The links at the bottom of the "Selected picture" / "Selected article" etc sections to "more articles [pictures]" and "suggest" would usually go to a list of the articles/pictures used in rotation, and to a page that gives instructions on how to add new articles/pictures to the portal, rather than a simple link to Commons or a link to a list of articles.
With Harriet Nahanee, the summary of the article is so long that there's nothing new left to read by the time you see the main article. I think the same is true of some of the other articles. I'd suggest trimming these down.
With the DYK, perhaps consider using just a few facts each time, and rotating randomly through selections of facts. Too much information overload, otherwise!

Hope this helps. Bencherlite ^Talk 13:07, 8 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

OK tks ...sounds good will update/shorten text soon..since no major problems except for length...I have listed it here Wikipedia:Portal/Directory#People_.26_Society

Cuddling has been done as per Reviewers recommendations ..........Buzzzsherman (talk) 01:25, 9 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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Portal:University of Oxford edit

My first foray into the world of portals. Where can I improve? I'm particularly looking for advice about the "sister links" section: I've used the suggested standard template for links to other Wikimedia projects, but only the Commons link actually does anything worthwhile, so should I just link to Commons? Similarly, there's a hardly-worthwhile "in the news" section since Wikinews isn't exactly overflowing with Oxford stories. Does this matter? Should I remove it? Opinions welcome. Bencherlite ^Talk 23:53, 2 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Well, one optinion, which might not be worth much. You could of course yourself write some of the wikinews articles for the portal. I know a few other portal managers do that. Another option, which is perhaps less frequently done, might be to add some sort of "this day in history" section, with some sort of rotation (maybe weekly or monthly) about various articles which have made the Wikipedia:Selected anniversaries section which relate to Oxford or its students or staff. Given the huge reputation Oxford has, and the probably large number of articles about Oxford-related people out there, you might have enough to make such a section workable. John Carter (talk) 15:22, 4 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I've in fact headed over to Wikinews since I started this portal, and written two articles relating to the University, creating a related category in the process; if I can keep this going, then there should be a steady trickle of stories. I like the idea of a "this (time period) in history" section, so I'll see what I can find for that. Do you happen to know of any portals that have such a section, so I can see one in operation? Thanks for your helpful review. Bencherlite ^Talk 15:27, 4 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

The selected anniversaries section looks good, if maybe a bit long. Having said that, I'm frankly stunned at the number of articles you were able to include so quickly. Maybe if they can be brought down to a weekly basis, or, alternately, daily basis, maybe adding other details of some of their lives, like dates of battles, publication date of books or papers, dates awarded titles or offices, to ensure that there are daily entries, that might be a bit less imposing, although, if you want to emphasize the number and amount of people related to Oxford, a longer section would probably do that better. Actually, horrible as it sounds, I don't actually know if other portals do this yet, although I am trying to set up some of the Christianity portals to include this material myself. But I looks good, except perhaps the length. John Carter (talk) 15:25, 7 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I think you're right about the length, and am already working on switching to an "On this day..." format with daily entries. I've found at least one name I can use for Feb 29, which was my main worry, so I'm sure I'll find stuff for the other 365 days. Bencherlite ^Talk 15:42, 7 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

In my opinion, the scope of this portal is very small. OhanaUnited^{Talk page} 06:59, 28 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry, only just noticed your comment. What would you like to see included as well? I've got articles about the university and colleges, biographies of academics and alumni, plenty of photos, DYKs etc. Do you want more content in each, or more sections, and if so what? Or, as I fear, by "scope" do you mean that you think that it fails 1(a) of the criteria ("broad and interesting" subject). Well, there's more than 800 years of history and thousands of alumni from all over the globe, with a world-wide recognition factor. I would have thought that's quite broad enough, as compared (say) to a Featured Portal about one TV cartoon, however great Homer and Bart are. Seriously, though, am I wasting my time in trying to get this to Featured status? More comments, please! Bencherlite ^Talk 08:38, 15 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Ok, fair enough. What is the stats on number of GAs and FAs used in the portal? OhanaUnited^{Talk page} 22:36, 16 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Selected article: 13 articles – 4 FAs, 5 FLs, 1 FLC, 1 GA (another, University of Oxford, is used as the lead article) and 2 Bs.
Selected biography: 29 articles – 13 FAs, 16 GAs
29 quotations; 28 sets of 3 x DYKs (all ex-Main Page); 30 pictures (including a few FPs)
All randomised. 13 x 29 x 29 x 28 x 30 = 9,183,720 possible combinations.
Usual standard other components, including Wikinews with a steady trickle of stories.
As noted above, I'm working towards a daily "on this day" feature (with a fall-back using "#ifexist" of a monthly "selected anniversaries"). When I have finished the 366 days, there'll be over 3.3 billion possible combinations of sub-pages in the course of a year. How's it looking at the moment? Bencherlite ^Talk 17:44, 17 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Stats updated (one of the FLCs is now an FL). Bencherlite ^Talk 22:28, 3 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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Portal:Gangs edit

Just created this portal. All the major content is done. I'd like to know how it looks. Any advice will be greatly appreciated. If you have time, You can add some content to my portal.--Zink Dawg -- 20:33, 3 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

There should be added more "selected articles". There can not be only one article especially in this sensitive theme. --Snek01 (talk) 21:53, 4 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]

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Portal:Christmas edit

All the major content is done, but I'd like to know what it needs to get to featured status. –Juliancolton | ^Talk 14:41, 9 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I would put "Related WikiProjects" somewhere to the bottom of the page. I do not like File:Christmas collage.PNG, because seems too small on the portal for me. Everything is OK. --Snek01 (talk) 21:58, 4 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]

If there would be any reasonable way to create more than one article section, that might be useful as well. Perhaps secular and religious sections, perhaps a separate section for "Christmas characters", or any other ways of basically showing more content in the portal. John Carter (talk) 16:50, 30 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Sounds like a reasonable idea(s). I'll see what I can do. –Juliancolton | ^Talk 14:37, 2 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Mostly very good. Especially impressed with the selection of songs. Amazing to get nine in public domain. Image selection needs help. Image 12 has been deleted from Commons. Please consider the following. Durova³⁷¹ 18:02, 30 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]

with a link to the song "Sleigh Ride" (a picture print from Currier & Ives).
Virgin and Child
Felbrigge Psalter (fourteenth century embroidered bookbinding of the annunciation)
Not certain about this one without notes on its exact content: a page from the Lindisfarne Gospels, Book of Matthew
Reindeer! ;)
Guide at Little Norway, Wisconsin. Early color photograph from 1942. Not specifically Christmas related, but darned if he doesn't look like Santa's elf.

Cool, thanks! I've incorporated most of those and revamped some of the other lower-quality picture selections. –Juliancolton | ^Talk 14:38, 2 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

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