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I've listed this article for peer review because… Noteworthy subject deserving WP featured article status. Thanks, – S. Rich (talk) 17:58, 19 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from AustralianRupert: G'day, thanks for working on this article. I have the following suggestions: AustralianRupert (talk) 10:05, 10 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"Because burials of seven countries' graves were" --> subject verb agreement issue ("burials" and "graves"): suggest rewording (or just removing "burials of")
"The numbers are 885 British troops, in accordance with the English customs of the dead" -- I am not quite sure what this sentence is attempting to say. Suggest rewording
for FAC, I tink this will need a reference: "The end of the eight pillars supporting the roof was designed as a bowl and a symbol representing the moment and the eternity, expressing a soft and solemn standing for the soldiers."
suggest adding more bibliographic details to Reference # 44
suggest making the date format consistent; there are at least three styles used at the moment in the article, e.g. "2020-09-26", "15 September 2019" and "March 29, 2019"
suggest adding a page number and year of publication for Reference # 70
suggest adding references to the table in the Total burials section

Hi @Srich32977: I want to make sure you saw the above comments. Z1720 (talk) 19:34, 4 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Srich32977 hasn't responded to the comments above, so I'm going to close this PR. When they have addressed the concerns, they are welcome to open a new PR. Z1720 (talk) 22:54, 18 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]