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I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to take the article to FLC

Thanks, Jona yo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 19:50, 21 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

No image for the infobox?
"Selena had released 22 music videos and 12 video/live albums during her career" no need for "had".
No need to link orchestra.
"which is a duet with" just "a duet with" is fine (you don't need "which is a").
"it featured Selena and a couple of people dancing" -> "featuring Selena and two people dancing..."
" dancing the cumbia dance in a beach house" -> "dancing to the cumbia in a beach house" and delink "beach house".
"dancing in the styles of hip hop." -> "hip-hop dancing."
Link Joshua Tree National Park and make the capitalisation correct.
You could mention in one sentence how/why Selena died.
""Viviras Selena", which is a tribute song," don't need "which is".
"was only featured in two scenes" -> "was featured in only two scenes"
"During Selena's tenth death anniversary " -> "In 2005, ten years after Selena's death..."
Make the tables conform with MOS:DTT, i.e. focus on the accessibility. You aren't prohibited from using colours for pure visual appeal, but please use col and row scopes.
Song titles don't match reliable sources with their capitalisation.
Don't think you need a separate table for posthumous videos, merge the tables into one sortable table.
"Video/Live albums" as a title isn't good, at least decapitalise and make it "Video/live albums"...
No need for the bullet points in the certifications column.
Ensure all references comply with WP:DASH (i.e. en-dashes not spaced hyphens) and have publisher/publication dates wherever possible.

The Rambling Man (talk) 18:37, 24 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]