I've listed this article for peer review because it's a solid B class article , and want to improve it.


Thanks, Saudi9999 06:53, 7 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Mattythewhite

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First of all, I've re-rated it to start on all of the WikiProject's quality scales. It contains hardly any text, for starters.

  • Can the image be used on all of these different articles? The fair-use rationale doesn't even specify which article it shouldn't be used in.
  • The "Major trophies" section needs to includes endashes instead of slashes for seasons and needs more referencing.
  • The "Current squad 2007/08" section should be renamed to just "Current squad" - doesn't really need "2007/08" on the end. The section should give a date so we know how up to date it is. And the source needs to be placed as a reference.
  • The "Famous players" section seems a bit.. blank. Maybe it could give some former players, including a criteria for their addition?
  • The box should be removed from the "Notes and references" section, per WP:CITE#Citation templates.
  • The "External links" section needs cutting down per WP:EL.
  • Then I notice that's all of it. Where is the text? The only text is in the lead. Surely this club has a history!

Needs a lot of work, and the lack of text is why I have downgraded it. Mattythewhite 10:17, 7 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]