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Raiden (Metal Gear) edit

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I've started editing this article some months ago considering the amount of sources I could find to expand the reception and creation sections. However, I have doubts about what does this article require before a copyedit and GA review, since it's still a C-Class. My main doubts are the organization and length from the sections.

Thanks, Tintor2 (talk) 23:12, 16 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comments some quick things...

"video game character" is a dab link.
The infobox image needs specific fair use justification for inclusion in this article.
The infobox image caption is an incomplete sentence so no need for a full stop.
Infobox, hyphens in the "affiliations" should be en-dashes.
I'd be happy for you to include "series" in the first wikilink of Metal Gear.
"came up with the idea of" just seems a little loose prose to me, not professional.
"white haired" should be hyphenated.
"sneaking suit" - this isn't common at all. What is this?
"which make him hard " makes?
LittleBigPlanet appears to be just one word.
Doctor Watson -> Dr. Watson.

The Rambling Man (talk) 20:04, 8 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks. Made the changes.Tintor2 (talk) 20:58, 8 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]