Wikipedia:Peer review/Nottingham Panthers/archive2
Nottingham Panthers edit
Archived review:Wikipedia:Peer review/Nottingham Panthers/archive1
This is already a GA and I'd now like to get it up to FA standard. Any comments and suggestions on any further improvements that need to be made would be very welcome. Thanks PanthersGirl (talk) 17:02, 7 December 2007 (UTC)
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- This is a deserved GA, and stands a good chance at FAC. Being picky as FA is the target:
- Things which require citation:
- First competitive game
- secured their second English League title by one point over Streatham.
- membership fell to five
- the Ice Stadium decided to shut down the Nottingham Panthers.
- modern Panthers took to the ice for the first time defeating the Solihull Barons 7–4 at the Ice Stadium.
- The Panthers lost all four of their quarter final group games and failed to advance to the finals at Wembley Arena.
- Some of these may be covered by a reference elsewhere in the same paragraph. In such cases there is no need to repeat the citation.
- "Summer" means a different time of year to those in the southern hemisphere. If the exact month is not known, try "close-season" or similar.
- Ensure that there is consistency in use of plurals. Most of the time the article uses plural form, but occasionally there are phrases like Nottingham was defeated 3–2 in the first leg.
- Perhaps a short section about the rivalry with the Steelers could be included, as it is the biggest rivalry in British hockey.
Hope this helps. Oldelpaso (talk) 10:51, 28 December 2007 (UTC)