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I've listed this article for peer review because I wanted to nominate it as a good article, but I don't know which parts I should improve.

Thanks, LucianoTheWindowsFan (talk) 18:52, 14 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

What I can tell you off the bat is that there needs to be a "Development and release" section documenting how the game was made. Also, the lead section should be expanded to summarize all the article's main points. You can consult the Manual of Style, particularly the Layout section, for more details. Cat's Tuxedo (talk) 16:39, 15 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I'm looking for reliable sources for this new thing:

Following many concerns from parent over the [[Nintendo Entertainment System|NES]], as well as the poor sales of ''[[Donkey Kong Jr. Math]]'', Nintendo hoped third-party licensees would step up and provide educational titles. Following the release of the SNES, parents were concerned due to its lack of backwards compatibility, as well as its $200 MSRP. Nintendo wanted to make game that made kids and adults happy, as well as making price cuts to the SNES.

''Mario Paint'' was directed and designed by Hirofumi Matsuoka.

''Mario Paint'' came bundled with the SNES Mouse, a mouse for the SNES, designed by [[Satoru Okada]].

''Mario Paint'' was unveiled at the 1992 [[Consumer Electronics Show|Summer Consumer Electronics Show]] in [[Chicago]].

On July 14, 1992, ''Mario Paint'' was released in Japan. It was later released in North America on August 1. On December 10, the game reached Europe.

But I can't find them. Could someone help me? LucianoTheWindowsFan (talk) 13:54, 16 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

You can use the reference library to find reliably sourced information. Cat's Tuxedo (talk) 18:18, 16 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]