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I've listed this article for peer review because I plan to nominate it to FAC. Astynax and Clarityfiend (from the WikiProject Guild of Copy Editors) have both reviewed the article and made major improvements. However, I want to be sure that it is ready to become a FA.

Thanks, Lecen (talk) 14:28, 17 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'm only peer reviewing sourcing quality and citation quality. Fifelfoo (talk) 01:24, 21 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Bibliography
  - Azevedo; Pinho; Rodrigues; Siber: spacing; this arises from the use of cite journal without a title parameter. Journal articles need to be cited by their title, fill in the |title= parameter with the name of the journal article. Often (almost always) it is considered courteous to provide the page range that the journal article occupies in the journal.
  - Bento: year
  - Morais: alphabetise
  - Needell: in Portuguese? It has an English title and and English speaking University publisher?
  - Cited but not used: Rodrigues, José Wasth; Magalhães, J. B.; Maul, Carlos (1953). (in Portuguese)Revista Militar Brasileira (Rio de Janeiro: Imprensa Militar) 59.
  - Doratioto December 2003, dubious title for a Portuguese journal article?
  - Haring: Cambridge, Massachusetts; yet not Porto Alegre, Brazil? If you're going to cite states for Obscure US cities, we need to cite countries for other obscure (in the publishing sense) cities. I have no idea where Belo Horizonte is; but I'm likely to know Lisboa (but given this is for English readers, Lisbon might be more courteous).
- Citations
  - Calmon 1975, pp. 660=661. => Calmon 1975, pp. 660–661.
  - Lyra 1977a, p.229-235. and Lyra 1977a, p. 235-238. Replace p. with pp. replace hyphen (–) with n-dash (–)
  - Carvalho 1976, p.250-266. Carvalho 1976, p. 288-290. the same as above
  - Broken citeref links (if one link from a source is broken, the rest usually are too): ^ Bento 2003, p. xi. ; ^ Doratioto December 2003, p. 62. ; Pinho 1936, p. 133. ; Sodré 2004, p. 137. ; Kraay and Whigham 2004, p. 18.

Fifelfoo, everything was fixed as you requested. Kind regards, --Lecen (talk) 12:09, 22 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]