Wikipedia:Peer review/List of songs recorded by Selena/archive1

List of songs recorded by Selena

This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because…I would like to take it to FLC very soon

Thanks, Jona^{talk to me} 15:54, 30 September 2012 (UTC)

• {{doing}}... Ping me if I haven't gotten back to you within a day :) Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs^(talk) 19:21, 18 November 2012 (UTC)

Comments by David Fuchs

• I think the lead section is way too big. The lead should really just provide an introduction and summarize the main points of the article, but this is giving a pretty significant chunk of her biography, as well as details not found anywhere else in the list. I do get that some of this is just a result of the list format, but I think breaking it up and slimming it down is still necessary. Readers shouldn't have to get through nearly a thousand words before hitting the main point of the list.
• The last paragraph seems to be meat that should be inline with the song details themselves. Other parts seem unnecessary--it's songs recorded by Selena, so why does it mention covers or samples? (It also makes it unclear if the Abraham "Feelings" track actually features Selena or it's just a song Selena recorded when she was six.
• The actual list section seems fine; it's clear, sortable, and provides easy access to references.
  • I note that a lot of the song stuff is referenced directly to the LP/liners. It might be good to see if you can find an online source to corroborate these, as it's rather hard to expect someone to dig out an 80's LP to verify.
  • I'm unsure of the reliability of El Porvenir; might want to write up a defense of it just for those who don't have the language skills to easily verify how it meets WP:RS.

--Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs^(talk) 13:45, 20 November 2012 (UTC)