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List of American football teams in the United Kingdom edit

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I've listed this article for peer review because I'd like it to have some further scrutiny before possibly submitting this as a Featured List Candidate.

Thanks, ~~ Bettia ~~ ^talk 11:58, 2 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

Image caption in the lead links one team but not the other, why?
- Chester Romans was deleted via AfD last year. Would a redlink be acceptable for an FLC? ★ Bald Zebra ★ ^talk 11:03, 13 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  - Done
"crew from USS Idaho defeated " normally we'd italicse the name, e.g. "USS Idaho".
- Done
"During World War II, matches ..." sentence is too long, I'd suggest splitting in two.
- Done
"championship a total of thirteen times " no need for "a total of".
- Done
Tables need to comply with MOS:DTT for row and col scopes, for screen-readers.
- scope="col" added to all tables, no row headers have been used
Avoid linking common geographical terms like London.
- Done
Don't put spaces between text and references.
- Done
West Essex Showboat row is missing the last cell.
- Done
Sortable tables should link items on every occurence as there's no guarantee that the linked item comes first after being resorted.
Clacton -> Clacton-on-Sea.
- Done
Use en-dashes in the ref titles, not spaced hyphens.
Check all refs have publication information, e.g. ref 28.
Don't mix accessdate formats in the refs.
Avoid SHOUTING in the ref titles.
Avoid bare URLs in the refs.

The Rambling Man (talk) 10:20, 13 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]