Wikipedia:Peer review/Leicester Grammar School/archive1
I found this stub so thought I'd have a go at expanding it- any comments are welcome. I know it repeats itself a few times, but I was about to go to bed when I started exapnding it...(I have signed up for the clinic, by the way).
It could really use a picture or 2, as well as your contributions! EvocativeIntrigue 23:45, 14 May 2006 (UTC)
- There are too many sections. Either certain sections should me merged, or else each section should be greatly expanded. — The Man in Question 00:08, 15 May 2006 (UTC)
- I'd like to commend you for striving to improve a high school article on Wikipedia, and would direct you to The Schools Portal to see the best such articles we have. This will give you ideas about what content is needed and how much info is warranted. Particularly look at Caulfield Grammar School and Hopkins School, the two featured high school articles, as well as Stuyvesant High School and Plano Senior High School. Good luck, and I'll be happy to help improve this article with time. Harro5 23:31, 19 May 2006 (UTC)
- Thanks for the comments- I'm not sure where the time's gone, but I'll get round to that soon! EVOCATIVEINTRIGUE TALKTOME | EMAILME | IMPROVEME 16:15, 26 July 2006 (UTC)