Wikipedia:Peer review/John Frusciante/archive2

John Frusciante edit

We're deeply focused on getting this article to FA class, but it is probably not ready for FAC yet. The article reached GA status about a month ago, and has improved a great deal since then. Although the whole article needs reviewing, the main thing I would like the reviewer to focus on is the "Musical Style" section, which is only a few days old. Thanks. Grim-Gym 04:56, 24 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I added a few comments to the talk page for the article. VisitorTalk 16:33, 26 August 2007 (UTC) Y Done[reply]

That's a helpful start, thanks. Grim-Gym 18:04, 26 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

References need to be consistently and correctly formatted. I started on it, but don't have time to finish. Refs with URLs all need retrieval requests. Should be: Last, First (date). Title. Work or Publisher, pages. Retrieved on date. - URL goes with title, of course. Directly after punctuation, no space before, no punctuation after. I'll review more later. LARA ♥LOVE 06:05, 27 August 2007 (UTC) Y Done[reply]

I fixed all the references—or so, I think I did. The refs that are in "cite news" format, automatically put the date last, so I let them lie. Let me know if everything is satisfactory. Thanks for the input and we look forward to hearing more. Grim-Gym 07:34, 27 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]