Jainism edit
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I've listed this article for peer review because it is a level 3 vital article and deserves GA. I've been trying to promote it to GA since a couple of years now. It would be highly appreciated if you could pinpoint improvements or tag them in the article itself, whichever can prevent GA rejections. Thanks in advance.
Thanks, Capankajsmilyo(Talk | Infobox assistance) 06:54, 31 October 2018 (UTC)
- In the lead itself there is a missing fullstop, before the fourth citation. (I would correct it but you really can't be missing out such things, that too in the lead.)
- In the second paragraph in the lead, why do "non-violence", "many-sidedness", "non-attachment" etc have quotes?
- There are three citation needed tags near the bottom of the page that need to be sorted out. There is one 'page needed' tag.
- The last paragraph about Mahatma Gandhi seems out of place. If if is there for wrapping up an article, then it is not needed and can be placed elsewhere, even removed. If you are relating it to the modern era, it needs expansion.
- The history section is only till the colonial era? Why not include a small subsection related to more recent history too. And here I am not talking about just demographics kind of data listed under the heading "Jains in the modern era". So either the history section should have a new subsection, or the modern era section needs expansion.
- Maybe a small line can be added somewhere explaining the word "Jaina" as opposed to merely "Jain" and "Jains". They are being used interchangeably. So here I am referring to "Etymology". This is more of a suggestion to be considered an not a necessity, an "Etymology" section.
- Regards DiplomatTesterMan (talk) 15:56, 13 December 2018 (UTC)