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Gilles Villeneuve edit

I'm looking at improving this up to Featured Article status (it's currently at GA) - any suggestions on what needs to be improved upon, clarified etc. will be appreciated. Thanks, Alexj2002 14:27, 23 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]

One thing I haven't (dared!) approach yet. Criticism of GV. Nelson Piquet and Keke Rosberg are both on record criticising his approach to driving, as are some other, lesser, drivers. If this could be worked in sympathetically it would, I think, improve the balance and depth of the article.
Re-reading it I think the language is also still not neutral enough - not quite encyclopaedic in tone and rather partial in places. Hope this helps.
The section on San Marino 82 also probably needs a clearer description of what actually happened in the race. 4u1e 23 October 2006

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ _t 21:59, 23 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]