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After a successful GAN review, I now plan to place it at FAC. I am not sure what else to do for the article so I would appreciate any comments that will help improve the page. GamerPro64 00:48, 15 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

lead
The plot description in paragraph 2 makes it sound like the game was completed, but then the third paragraph undermines that by noting a final was never released. Does the beta go through the entire game? If not, the plot description shouldn't be made with the authortive prose that one could complete the game. If so, the 3rd paragraph should note that one or both releases can still beat the game.
  • Added information that the game can be played through. GamerPro64 14:04, 25 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Characters
Should also link to List of Chrono Trigger characters like the previous section.
You should also link to indivisual names.
Development
around "98% complete" - that seems like its part of a larger quote. If so, it would be better to extend the quote a bit and get all the relevant info or remove the quotation marks. The way its structured there only raises a red-flag that things might not be paraphrased enough.
Reaction
Wired.com -> Wired (do not use the .com for this site as its just an extension of their magazine)
Why single out a specific province, Quebec, and not particular provinces elsewhere? That seems like a kind of bias.
Finally, that last section should probably be moved right below development. It's similar to a "release" section in most of games.陣内Jinnai 22:42, 18 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Are you certain Dreamtime is linked to the correct wikilink for what they are describing?∞陣内Jinnai 00:39, 26 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • I don't know what it was supposed to be linked to. I removed the wiki-link. GamerPro64 19:04, 26 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • A thought, but you may want to talk with the team and see if they'll release their artwork of the original characters such as King Zeal, Kashmir and others under CC so you can get more images.∞陣内Jinnai 15:53, 27 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
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