Wikipedia:Peer review/Anthony Stokes (footballer)/archive1

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I've listed this article for peer review because I want an outside perspective on how it can be improved.


Thanks,  Sunderland06  19:29, 22 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

  • Expand the lead per WP:LEAD.
  • Done Football (soccer) has now become Association football so when you get the chance, prevent the redirect.
  • Done Use en-dash for scorelines per WP:DASH
  • Add some information on his life before professional football.
  • Done Place citations immediately after punctuation where possible per WP:CITE.
  • Changed to, "their Fife rivals" "their bitter Fife rivals" - POV.
  • Done Merge short paragraphs - two sentences don't really make a para.
  • Remove the trivia section - flow the details into the main prose.
  • Done Ensure all dates are formatted per WP:DATE (so avoid things like 1st..)
  • Expand the references to include the accessdate= parameter.
  • Done Be consistent in the way you reference the BBC, you've got four different ways of doing it right now.

That should help! The Rambling Man (talk) 19:50, 22 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]