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The list was not promoted by Giants2008 10:02, 6 May 2013 (UTC) [1].[reply]

Taio Cruz discography

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Nominator(s): I Am Rufus • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 17:27, 8 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because having extensively developed the tables and prose, I believe it now meets the FLC standard. (And now this my only open nomination.) I Am Rufus • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 17:27, 8 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

  • Oppose. The leading section does not follow any logical order. It jumps from a single to an album and back. It is difficult to understand. In addition, please, count the number of "also"s in the leading section. It is an obvious example of "also abuse". Ruslik_Zero 18:21, 9 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Performed a copyedit - removed three of the "also"s, and tried to make the order and flow of the lead more logical. I Am Rufus • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 21:35, 9 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

;Comments Support

  • The first paragraph in the lead should be broken up (perhaps separated by album releases).
  • "contained five singles which all reached the top" → all of which
  • Wiki-link Ludacris in the lead.
  • In the live album and EP section: Formats → format
  • Citations should be added to all claims in the Notes section

– Underneath-it-All (talk) 22:15, 9 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 17:45, 25 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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  • Find a good link for "certified".
  • "12 October 2009[4] which was preceded by" maybe for neatness just remove "which was" and have a comma after 2009.
  • "house musician" probably should be linked appropriately.
  • Third Strike is a dab link.
  • Avoid blank cells in tables, if there's nothing to say, perhaps add an en-dash.
  • This seems somewhat unnecessary - if there's nothing to say, why add anything? Yes, we put en-dashes in the chart position cells, but that's more a matter of neatness than anything as tables would just be full of tiny empty blank boxes - the certification cells are much bigger, so adding a dash hardly makes any difference. I Am Rufus • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 10:22, 24 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

The Rambling Man (talk) 18:13, 22 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

  • Ok, not a big deal, but neatness applies throughout, not just the chart positions. The Rambling Man (talk)
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