Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Rage Against the Machine discography
- The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
The list was promoted by User:Scorpion0422 22:28, 11 November 2008 [1].
After a "little" cleanup, I think this ready for the battle. Cannibaloki 18:32, 30 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved review by SRX
- Review by SrX
- Rage Against the Machine is a Los Angeles-based band formed in 1991 by Zack de la Rocha, Tom Morello, Tim Commerford and Brad Wilk. - it should state in parenthesis who plays what in the band.
- Don't added these details before, because I thought someone would ask me to remove them.
- The band is noted for its blend of rap, heavy metal, punk and funk as well as its revolutionary politics and lyrics. - how about The band is noted for it's blend of rap, heavy metal, punk, and funk; it is also known for it's revolutionary politics and lyrics.
- Reworded.
- The full-length spawned the singles "Killing in the Name", "Freedom", "Bombtrack" and "Bullet in the Head". - full-length? Was the self named album full length, if so it should be noted before this sentence.
- Five singles were released from the album, the most successful being "Bulls on Parade". - how is "Bulls of Parade" most successful? Should be stated and sourced.
- I removed the two sentences, even with references, sounds very strange and not add anything to in the text.
- Tables look fine, all publishers in the refs that can be linked need to be wikilinked.--SRX 21:22, 30 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Support Comments from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs)
"The band is noted for it's"—"it's"-->its.- Fixed.
"whilst"-->although or while.- Fixed.
"Their next full-length" Full length what?- Reworded.
"The Battle of Mexico City, a video album composed of a recording of a 1999 live performance in Mexico City, saw release in 2001, and 2003 saw the release of a live album titled Live at the Grand Olympic Auditorium, an edited recording of the band's final two concerts on September 12 and 13, 2000 at the Grand Olympic Auditorium."-->The Battle of Mexico City, a video album composed of a recording of a 1999 live performance in Mexico City, was released in 2001. In 2003, a live album titled Live at the Grand Olympic Auditorium was released. It was an edited recording of the band's final two concerts on September 12 and 13, 2000 at the Grand Olympic Auditorium.- Reworded.
Could some information about the lone see also link, 2001 Clear Channel memorandum, be integrated into the article?Dabomb87 (talk) 03:28, 1 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]- Information about this fact were added, now it is up to you ascertain whether this same information are well written. =P Cannibaloki 15:41, 1 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I fixed the minor grammar issues, but I want to know how the memorandum affected the band's future albums and songwriting.Dabomb87 (talk) 15:35, 2 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]- Well, this happened when the band had already split, so I tried even if some of the members spoke something about, but so far not found anything. If you have something talking about this, please help me!
- Information about this fact were added, now it is up to you ascertain whether this same information are well written. =P Cannibaloki 15:41, 1 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
"Their first release was 1992's eponymous Rage Against the Machine"-->They released their debut album, the eponymous Rage Against the Machine album, in 1992;...Dabomb87 (talk) 15:35, 2 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Comments - sources look okay, links checked out with the link checker tool. Note I did not evaluate the non-English sources. Ealdgyth - Talk 17:09, 4 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
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