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The list was promoted by Giants2008 23:07, 29 November 2015 [1].

Natalie Portman filmography edit

Natalie Portman filmography (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)

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Nominator(s): Cowlibob (talk) 18:44, 3 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Natalie Portman is an actress best known for her roles as a child assassin in Léon: The Professional (1994), Queen Padmé Amidala in the Star Wars prequel trilogy, and her Oscar-winning turn as a tortured ballerina in Black Swan (2010). Here's a hopefully comprehensive rundown of her career thus far. As usual look forward to all the helpful comments on how to improve it. Cowlibob (talk) 18:44, 3 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from GagaNutella
Comments from GagaNutella
  • Star Wars prequel trilogy, italic Star Wars.
  • <br> refs 17,18; 29,30; 37,38; 34,42.
  • {{Abbr|Ref.|Reference}} → {{Abbr|Ref(s).|Reference(s)}}
  • Use sortable table on Television section.
  • I don't like the way you compact the year column. You should distinguish them: Sesame Street and The Simpsons. You can wikilink both in this case.
  • The A.V. Club, use work=
  • Where is the publisher of ref 33?
  • Ref 24: MTV → MTV News
  • OVERLINK: The New York Times refs 7, 16, 19, 22, 34, 38, 46; CNN ref 11; Los Angeles Times ref 21; The Daily Telegraph refs 27, 31, 39; Variety refs 29, 32, 40, 41, 42; TV Guide refs 45, 46.

That's all. GagaNutellatalk 01:45, 4 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@GagaNutella: Thanks for the review. Ssven2 helped a lot with these. I think these comments have been sorted. Cowlibob (talk) 11:52, 5 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Support. This list looks great, congrats! GagaNutellatalk 12:16, 5 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from Jimknut (talk) 20:01, 6 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Films

Television

  • Since Portman's television work was in the United States, the column titled "Channel" should be changed to "Network", which is more appropriate for American television. (I believe "channel" is more appropriate for British TV.) Jimknut (talk) 03:42, 4 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]
@Jimknut: Thanks for the review. Have sorted these comments, I hope. The Terrence Mallick film's date is still TBA. The article may say that it's coming next year as briefly a distributor announced a 2016 date back in July but withdrew it in August so currently the release date is unknown. Cowlibob (talk) 11:52, 5 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Support — Looks good. Jimknut (talk) 20:01, 6 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from SNUGGUMS
  • "trained by a hitman played by Jean Reno" doesn't really seem like necessary detail
  • Remove the comma from "she appeared in the comedies No Strings Attached, and Your Highness"
  • Add a comma after "made her feature film directorial debut with A Tale of Love and Darkness"
  • For Pride and Prejudice and Zombies, I would use Template:N/a in place of the "—".
  • Sesame Street and The Simpsons only need to be linked once
  • This doesn't mention any of her characters' names; you'll have to find something else and be sure each role is supported by references. Snuggums (talk / edits) 04:50, 17 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]
--Birdienest81 (talk) 08:03, 17 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • Another one here that lists Portman's role in No Strings Attached as Emma Kurtzman.
--Birdienest81 (talk) 08:06, 17 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • One from Los Angeles Times that lists Emilia Greenleaf role in The Other Woman.
--Birdienest81 (talk) 08:10, 17 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • One from TheWrap about her Jane Got a Gun role.
--Birdienest81 (talk) 08:12, 17 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]
@SNUGGUMS: Thanks for the review. Thanks for the help Birdienest81. I think I've sorted most of the above points. Kept the ref as I used it to cite her producer roles but have added additional ones for the character she played etc. I have thought of using the N/A template before but unfortunately it sorts any row with the template under N while the "—" separates them out. Cowlibob (talk) 20:30, 18 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • I posted the AMPAS source, but some roles only listed the first name. So I looked for sources that listed the role's complete name (including surname). Anyways, Happy to give it a support.
--Birdienest81 (talk) 20:34, 18 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]
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