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NBA All-Star Weekend Three-Point Shootout

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Another NBA-related list. Comments welcomed.—Chris! ct 00:50, 19 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from KV5
Oppose from Killervogel5
  • Violates WP:RS, specifically the use of third-party source. Every reference except one is to the league's official website, not to an independent source.
  • "No players have ever achieved the perfect score of 30."→"No player has..."
  • Three point arc needs a wikilink.
  • On my monitor, there are references for statements breaking over lines, which means that there may be a space between them, I believe. "television instant replay system.[2][4]"
I am not too sure what you mean, but I think I took care of it. Let me know if I didn't.—Chris! ct 02:05, 20 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • The 1998-99 season should be sorted so that it ends up at the bottom when the total points are sorted (right now it sorts as higher than 25 points). This can be rectified by sorting the m-dash as negative 1.
  • Note B should be a complete sentence.
  • Neither navbox has a direct link to this article. Add links or remove the navboxes.

I will reconsider an oppose only if third-party sources can be found. KV5 • Squawk box • Fight on! 18:14, 19 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Every point is addressed except the first one. I am not sure if it is actionable since there aren't many independent sources out there about this subject. But, I will try to research more and see if I can improve it further. Also, I think it is unfair to oppose this nomination based solely on the fact that most of references used are from the league's official website. But that is just my opinion, I guess.—Chris! ct 02:05, 20 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I add two more independent refs. So hopefully you are satisfied.—Chris! ct 02:19, 20 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I am still wary about the high level of league-dependent sources but I support. KV5 • Squawk box • Fight on! 19:49, 20 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from SRX

Comments

  • In this contest, participants attempt to shoot as many three-point field goals as possible from the five positions behind the three-point arc - remove the from the five positions
  • In cases of tie, additional rounds are played to determine the winner. - how about In the case of a tie...
  • In the lead, the last paragraph, it should be stated who was the first winner, and the most recent winner.--SRX 20:00, 20 December 2008 (UTC)
Done—Chris! ct 20:08, 20 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support - all problems fixed to comply with WP:WIAFL.--SRX 01:49, 21 December 2008 (UTC)
Resolved comments from Giants2008

Comments -

  • Move reference 1 after the parenthesis in the first sentence.
  • The Three-point Shootout is an National Basketball Association contest...". Typo.
    • Not really. Try to say it out loud. It should be "an NBA."—Chris! ct 21:01, 22 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
      • But NBA is spelled out here: a National Basketball Association... Dabomb87 (talk) 21:20, 22 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Move the first use of reference 2 so it can cover the "money ball" part.
  • "Three players with the top scores advance to the finals." I suggest adding "The" to start this sentence.
  • "which was not made in the same round as the 25 points" Perhaps try "which was not made in his 25-point round"
  • 2007–08 NBA season should be 2007–08 seasons.
    • "Seasons" with an "s" seems incorrect —Chris! ct 21:01, 22 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
      • It now reads "who won the contest in the 2006–07 and 2007–08 season". I take it that season should be plural, as it represents both of Kapono's victories. Alternately, season could just be removed. Either way, I don't think it looks right as is. Giants2008 (17-14) 03:33, 23 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Photo caption: "Larry Bird has won this contest three consecutive times" implies that he is the current champion. Removing the has should be good enough to fix it.
  • Perhaps make clear that Stojakovic's two point totals came in the tie-breakers? It was a little confusing to me at first.
    • What do you suggest? I already have a note for that.—Chris! ct 21:01, 22 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
      • I would just add to the note and say that the score given came from the tie-breaker. Giants2008 (17-14) 03:33, 23 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • There's room for one more photo on the right. I first thought to ask for a photo of Peja, but the one free one is blurry and not the best choice. Ray Allen has a couple of good free pictures; one of these would be nice to have.
  • Records: Why are the refs in two columns out of order? They are currently both [8][7][1]. Usually, citations should be put in numerical order.
Giants2008 (17-14) 20:09, 22 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Support - After the fixes above, I think this meets FL standards. Giants2008 (17-14) 16:43, 23 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Support, all issues resolved. Dabomb87 (talk) 04:56, 24 December 2008 (UTC) [reply]
Resolved issues, Dabomb87 (talk)

Comments from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs)

  • "Since then, however, six players typically take part in the contest." Why only "typically"?
  • "Hodges and Kapono are tied for the scoring record with 25 points. No player has ever achieved the perfect score of 30." If the scoring record is 25, then is it not understood that the perfect score has not been attained?
  • In the key: The "Player (X)" and "Team (X)" should be changed to "Player (#)" and "Team (#)".
  • Center the em dashes in the table.
  • "Denotes the number of times the team has won" The teams can't win, try "Denotes the number of times a player from this team has won". Dabomb87 (talk) 21:04, 23 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
    • In response to your first point, I slightly reword the sentence, though I am not sure if I addressed your concern. Everything else is done.—Chris! ct 21:23, 23 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • "NBA All-Star Weekend Three-point Shootout" Why is "point" not capitalized ? All your other changes look good. I tweaked that one sentence a bit. Dabomb87 (talk) 04:37, 24 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
    • Done now. Thanks—Chris! ct 04:50, 24 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Sources look good. Dabomb87 (talk) 21:04, 23 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from -- SRE.K.Annoyomous.L.24

Comments by -- SRE.K.Annoyomous.L.24[c]

  • In the brackets on the first sentence, "also named the" --> "officially named the", since that is the official name.
  • "—one on each baseline..." there are two on each baseline, not one.
No, one shot on each baseline and there are two baselines, which mean there are two shot total.—Chris! ct 20:12, 28 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
A baseline is the end of the court, and if it is on each baseline, then one is on one side of the court, and one is on the other. -- signed by SRE.K.Annoyomous.L.24 spell my name backwards at 21:44, 28 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Ok, I see what you mean—Chris! ct 23:28, 28 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • "...have both won..." --> "...have each won..."
  • "...have won..." --> "...have each won..."
  • The whole third paragraph needs a general reference to be cited at the end of the paragraph.
This is based on the referenced list below and thus does not need a reference. Everything else done.—Chris! ct 20:12, 28 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I just think that readers may think that the third paragraph does not have a reference, that's all. -- signed by SRE.K.Annoyomous.L.24 spell my name backwards at 21:44, 28 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

-- signed by SRE.K.Annoyomous.L.24 spell my name backwards at 07:46, 28 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

No. This contest is part of NBA All-Star Weekend, but not the NBA All-Star Game itself.—Chris! ct 20:12, 28 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Since it's in the All-Star Game, wikilink all the years to the All-Star Game.
  • Note that the column, "Season", that each year is linked to an article about that particular NBA All-Star Game.
See above.—Chris! ct 20:12, 28 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
If you look at 2008 NBA All-Star Game, you will see that it includes the events in the All-Star Weekend. Maybe you should wikilink all the years to the respective All-Star Game. -- signed by SRE.K.Annoyomous.L.24 (spell my name backwards) at 11:02, 1 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I still don't think this is a good idea. Keep in mind that this contest started in 1986, so if I link to 2008, I must also link to 1986. Now look at 1986 NBA All-Star Game, it has no info on events in the All-Star Weekend. And I don't like how some links in the list are irrelevant to the topic. Perhaps a discussion is needed on whether events in the All-Star Weekend should be in the All-Star Game article or not.—Chris! ct 19:56, 1 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Now I get what you mean. -- signed by SRE.K.Annoyomous.L.24 (spell my name backwards) at 01:39, 2 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Discussion/Comment

Comments

  • In this contest, participants attempt to shoot as many three-point field goals as possible from five positions behind the three-point arc—one on each baseline, one at the top of the arc as well as two halfway between the two baselines and the top of the arc. Aren't the two points "halfway between the two baselines and the top of the arc" commonly called the wings?
That's not the real name for the two points halfway between the two baselines and the top of the arc though. It is just a common saying. -- signed by SRE.K.Annoyomous.L.24 spell my name backwards at 00:57, 29 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Well, I'm just looking for a way to reduce the wordage. I don't know if there are "official" names for any parts of the basketball court. FWIW, this source calls those spots the wings. Zagalejo^^^ 03:43, 29 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
As long as it has a reliable source, and it has to be true, so I guess Chris should add it on. -- signed by SRE.K.Annoyomous.L.24 spell my name backwards at 03:48, 29 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
From the source, it states, "each corner, both wings and the top of the key [should be arc]." I think this version is better than "one on each baseline, one at the top of the arc as well as two halfway between the two baselines and the top of the arc." -- signed by SRE.K.Annoyomous.L.24 spell my name backwards at 03:50, 29 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I agree with you guys that this version is better, but we have to assume readers don't understand what we are talking about. So perhaps the best way is to combine the two.—Chris! ct 18:57, 29 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Nice job on combing. -- signed by SRE.K.Annoyomous.L.24 spell my name backwards at 23:33, 29 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Unfortunately, I think the sentence still needs some work. If you try parsing it, you'll see that the grammar is a bit sloppy. For example, what does "two" refer to in "two on the baseline"? There's no clear antecedent. (I think I know what it's supposed to refer to, but we shouldn't make readers stumble.) Zagalejo^^^ 04:05, 30 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Then can you please reword the sentence for me? Thanks—Chris! ct 05:02, 30 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Well, I'm struggling to find a way to make the sentence clear to non-basketball fans without being too wordy. I tried to make things very simple- I just said that a player begins at one corner, and works his way around the arc. If someone wants to add more detail, they can take a stab at it. (It might not be a bad idea to include a simple diagram of the positions from which the player shoots. Anyone good with graphics?) Zagalejo^^^ 23:04, 30 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
(outdent) A minor fix to File:Basketball positions.svg could work. —Chris! ct 23:12, 30 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Is the money ball supposed to honor the ABA ball? Zagalejo^^^ 21:13, 28 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry for my ignorance, but I seriously don't know the answers.—Chris! ct 23:28, 28 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I think it does, but I don't know for sure, as Zagalejo may know, the ABA ball was colored with the American flag colors, same as the money ball. I'll my to find the reference. -- signed by SRE.K.Annoyomous.L.24 spell my name backwards at 00:57, 29 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Here is a About.com reference, and here is a USA Today reference. The USA Today one states, "I made just five shots, including one ABA-like red, white and blue ball, better known in NBA circles as the two-ball because you register 2 points if you make the final ball in each rack." -- signed by SRE.K.Annoyomous.L.24 spell my name backwards at 01:05, 29 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Is anyone going to reply to my comment, since I really want to know what users think of it. -- signed by SRE.K.Annoyomous.L.24 spell my name backwards at 23:33, 29 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Hmmm. I don't think those sources really prove that the ball is intended as a salute to the ABA. I'll see if I can dig something up, though, since I'm pretty sure there is a connection of some sort. Zagalejo^^^ 04:12, 30 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
But the article could tell the readers that the red, white, and blue ball is ABA-like (ie. The ABA-like red, white, and blue ball, also known as the "money" ball...) -- signed by SRE.K.Annoyomous.L.24 spell my name backwards at 10:08, 30 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
The two-point ball in the most recent contest is not red white blue anymore, but gold I believed. That's why I wrote "special colored ball" in the article. Anyhow, this info is pretty trivial and probably shouldn't be in the article.—Chris! ct 21:00, 30 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Minor grammatical point: Fixed to "specially". Dabomb87 (talk) 21:15, 30 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Ah, you're right. I just watched some of the last contest on YouTube, and the ball is, like, yellow and bluish green now. Zagalejo^^^ 23:12, 30 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I believe that the blue and gold ball was only for the All-Star Game for New Orleans. I think it'll change back to the ABA-like ball in this year's All-Star Game in Phoenix. -- signed by SRE.K.Annoyomous.L.24 spell my name backwards at 01:02, 31 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
(outdent) You sure? Can you show any evidence on that?—Chris! ct 04:54, 31 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I'm not sure, but I believe it is true. Just say "specially colored ball" for now. -- signed by SRE.K.Annoyomous.L.24 spell my name backwards at 06:59, 31 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comment - In the sentence "Hodges also holds the record for making 19 consecutive shots (which was not made in his 25-point round)," should the parenthetical comment read "which were not made in his 25-point round), if the "was" refers to the 19 shots? Otherwise looks good. Rlendog (talk) 18:12, 2 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Done—Chris! ct 02:00, 4 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
  • "often nicknamed the "money ball") -> "often nicknamed the money ball)"
  • "Change "The first place is worth $35,000" to "The first place winner receives $35,000" and so on for the other places. The former seems weird to me.
  • "Denotes the number of times the player have won" -> "Denotes the number of times the player has won"
  • "Denotes the number of times a player from this team have won" -> "Denotes the number of times a player from this team has won"
  • "Most points, round" -> "Most points in a round" to the the same as the next table.
  • "Ray Allen won this contest in the 2000–01 season, while playing with the Milwaukee Bucks." doesn't need a comma.
  • For all captions, change "this contest" to "the contest".
Done—Chris! ct 02:00, 4 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by -- SRE.K.Annoyomous.L.24[c]

  • Laugh out loud, I found something that can be quite interesting. Why didn't you include the finalists of the Three-Point Shootout? If you don't, shouldn't this article be named "List of NBA All-Star Weekend Three-Point Shootout winners"? -- signed by SRE.K.Annoyomous.L.24 (spell my name backwards) at 06:24, 3 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Closing note: This candidate has been promoted, but there may be a delay in the bot processing the close. Please see WP:FLC/ar, and leave the {{FLC}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Matthewedwards (talk • contribs • email) 06:03, 4 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

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