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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by Giants2008 17:09, 16 October 2012 [1].

Lykke Li discography edit

Lykke Li discography (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)

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Nominator(s): Pancake (talk) 12:24, 30 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I created this article from scratch earlier this month and I have been improving it ever since. Now after a few weeks of dedicated work, I feel that it meets the FL criteria. Pancake (talk) 12:24, 30 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from Jonatalk to me 21:58, 2 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Comments by AJona1992
  • Singer-songwriter needs to be wikilink
  • When was her debut album released?
  • Not sure if you should say "hit" and "quite low" sounds too fan-y.
  • You don't need to link record chart. Best, Jonatalk to me 21:26, 30 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
 Done. Thank you for your comments. Pancake (talk) 08:05, 1 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Support. Jonatalk to me 21:58, 2 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from NapHit (talk) 20:56, 1 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
  • "at age 19" -> when she was 19  Done
  • I'm not a fan of sentences starting with "In 2001 etc" its poor prose, sentences that start with this prefix should be changed so the prose flows and doesn't read like a list.  Done
  • "she released her critically acclaimed sophomore effort" sophomore should be changed as most readers won't be aware what it means. Also, just use album instead of effort, really doesn't sound right referring to an album as an effort  Done
  • "which adapts" I think you mean adopts  Done
  • Why does the link LL in the table go to EMI? The article makes no mention of EMI in the article  Done
    I removed the link. EMI has a so-called exclusive license to LL in Sweden, but I haven't been able to find a source for that other than the copyright info on iTunes, and I'm unsure if that will suffice as a source. Pancake (talk) 16:21, 1 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • The semi-colon should be used for bolding as its a WP:ACCESS issue. Use the conventional heading method as those using screen readers can only identify formatted headings  Done
  • Our article has Allmusic as AllMusic, so refs should be changed to reflect this  Done

NapHit (talk) 14:02, 1 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from TBrandley (talk) 01:31, 3 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
  • Alt text needs to be added to the images for WP:ACCESS, per WP:ALT; it should briefly explain the contents of the image itself  Done
  • Unlink music videos per WP:OVERLINK
    Do you mean in the lead? I don't see how that's overlinking. Pancake (talk) 14:17, 2 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add table captions to the tables to ensure it meets MOS:DTT, take Train discography for an example of those captions.  Done
  • "Apple, Inc" should be just simply "Apple"  Done
  • "Time, Inc" remove that unneeded comma not apart of the company name at all  Done
  • Categories should be sorted in alphabetical order in this case  Done

TBrandley 23:47, 1 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 07:43, 8 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
  • Where are the release dates referenced and what territory do they relate to? E.g. I looked up Youth Novels (which says 30 January 2008) and the ref says 22 August 2008 for Sweden.  Done
  • Some of the releases weren't just LL, they were LL/Atlantic weren't they?  Done
  • The ""—" denotes a recording that did not chart or was not released in that territory." key should be added to the "other charted songs" table.  Done
  • Hung Medien says "Possibility" was a single, but this discog says it's a "non-single" in the caption, not even sure what that means.
    "Possibility" was not released in any form, so it's not a single. I changed "non-single" to simply "song". Pancake (talk) 14:52, 5 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

The Rambling Man (talk) 09:30, 5 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from Crisco 1492 (talk)
*Li co-founded the artist collective and record label INGRID in 2012. - What's the relevance?
  • She is a member of INGRID and will appear on the group's releases. Pancake (talk) 14:25, 13 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    Perhaps make it more explicit for people who don't listen to Li, especially if they group has announced an upcoming album. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:29, 13 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    Added. Pancake (talk) 14:41, 13 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    Any reason the album is not in the discography? — Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:43, 13 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    Her song on the album is listed under Album appearances. The album doesn't appear here because it's not Li's album, she just appears on it, similar to how she appears on the tribute album Just Tell Me That You Want Me. Pancake (talk) 14:45, 13 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
I've given a copyedit, be sure to check. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:31, 12 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks. Pancake (talk) 14:25, 13 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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