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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:25, 10 March 2022 (UTC) [1].[reply]

List of accolades received by Veer-Zaara

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List of accolades received by Veer-Zaara (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)

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Nominator(s): —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 00:09, 30 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this because I believe this list is comprehensive enough... —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 00:09, 30 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from ChrisTheDude (talk) 18:56, 30 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
*"Yash Chopra garnered several accolades for his direction in Veer-Zaara" => "Yash Chopra garnered several accolades for his direction of Veer-Zaara." (note the full stop at the end)
  • "Set in the background of" => "Set against the background of"
  • "Soundtrack for Veer-Zaara is" => "The soundtrack for Veer-Zaara is"
  • "based on the composition by the late Madan Mohan, which was later revised by his son Sanjeev Kohli" => "based on compositions by the late Madan Mohan, which were later revised by his son Sanjeev Kohli"
  • "on the sets that were built" => "on sets that were built"
  • "with the editing being finished by Ritesh Soni" - Soni presumably didn't just finish the editing, he did all of it, so this should be "and was edited by Ritesh Soni"
  • "the film emerged as the India's" => "the film emerged as India's"
  • "highest-grossing film of the year with earning" => "highest-grossing film of the year, earning"
  • "and two Best Supporting Actress" - doesn't really work grammatically, I suggest "and two nominations for Best Supporting Actress"
  • "at the 50th Filmfare Awards" - move this to after "eleven nominations"
  • One mention of Anil Mehta in the table sorts incorrectly under M
  • That's what I got :-) -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:54, 30 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Done. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 09:15, 30 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Kavyansh

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  • "Veer Pratap Singh (Shah Rukh Khan), an Indian Air Force pilot, and Zaara Hayaat Khan (Zinta)" — why does SRK has his full name mentioned, while Preity Zinta has just her surname mentioned?
  • "by the late Madan Mohan" — I don't think that on Wikipedia, we ever mention someone as 'late'. Is it important to specify that he had died?
  • "Declared a commercial success" — who declared it?
  • "It won 34 awards out of 92 nominations" — 'It' here refers to the film, or Rachel Dwyer's listing of the film in that list? Specify
  • I also see inconsistency in listing the names/surnames in the last paragraph of the lead
  • In the sortable table, every entry which deserves a link should be linked every single time.

That is it for now. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 18:15, 2 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Support for promoting this to FL status. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 09:51, 3 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Image review

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Source review — Pass

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Version reviewed — [2]

  • Inconsistency in linking the media outlet/website. The Hindu is linked in Ref#1, but not in Ref#4. Bollywood Movie Awards linked in Ref#9.2, but not in Ref#9.3; check all citations.
  • "Amsterdam, Netherlands" and "New Delhi, India" are the only mentioned location in the references. You might want to remove it for consistency with rest of the article.
  • Rest, looks good. Link checker tools shows that all the links are accessible. The two links it reported were maybe false errors, because I could access them.

– Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 18:28, 2 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Kavyansh.Singh: Done. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 22:54, 2 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Pass for source review. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 09:52, 3 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]
AryKun
  • "tribulations, and the" → Comma not needed.
  • "Sharmishta Roy, and was" → Comma not needed.
  • "including Best Director (Yash Chopra)" → Chopra is the only one with his full name given. Same for the next sentence.
  • "Best Supporting Actor (Bachchan)" → Neither of the Bachchans is given as part of the supporting cast or even mentioned up to this point.
  • Everything else seems fine. AryKun (talk) 11:24, 19 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Done. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 13:18, 19 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Promoting. --PresN 16:26, 9 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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