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The list was promoted by Giants2008 via FACBot (talk) 00:25, 5 June 2023 (UTC) [1].[reply]

List of accolades received by Dune (2021 film) edit

Featured list candidates/List of accolades received by Dune (2021 film)/archive1

Nominator(s): Birdienest81talk 08:54, 13 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Dune is a 2021 American epic science fiction film directed by Denis Villeneuve and written by Villeneuve, Jon Spaihts, and Eric Roth. Based on mostly the first half of Frank Herbert's novel of the same name, the film stars Timothée Chalamet as Paul Atreides, a Mentat living in the distant future from House Atreides, who is thrust into a war for the deadly and inhospitable desert planet Arrakis. This is my ninth film accolades list to be nominated for featured list status, and I largely based the format off of the accolades lists for The Artist, The Big Short, CODA, Dunkirk, If Beale Street Could Talk, 1917, The Shape of Water, and Slumdog Millionaire. I will gladly accept your comments to improve this list. Birdienest81talk 08:54, 13 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by RunningTiger123 edit

Disclosure: I did work a little on this list, especially before it was split from Dune (2021 film), but it has been significantly updated since I worked on it.

Infobox is missing Grande Prêmio do Cinema Brasileiro
"worlwide" is a typo
"proudction design" is a typo
"...the 94th Academy Awards including Best Picture and..." → "...the 94th Academy Awards, including Best Picture, and..."
- Also, maybe mention that Dune was the most-recognized film at that year's Oscars? Could be as simple as saying "went on to win a leading six awards".
"...the 79th Golden Globe Awards winning one..." → "...the 79th Golden Globe Awards, winning one..."
Link text for AARP Movies for Grownups Award for Best Director should only read "Best Director"
Lists of names use inconsistent formatting – compare "Jon Spaihts, Denis Villeneuve and Eric Roth" (no serial comma), "Jon Spaihts, Denis Villeneuve, and Eric Roth" (includes serial comma), and "Jon Spaihts, Denis Villeneuve, Eric Roth" (doesn't use "and"). Pick one format and use it consistently.
For the Academy Award for makeup/hairstyling, add a comma after Mowat
For the Make-Up Artists Guild, remove the space between Mowat and the comma
Assuming the SBIFF award is sponsored by Variety, use italics for "Variety Artisans Award"
Use an en dash for "Best Adapted Screenplay – Film" at the USC Scripter Awards
For the WGA Awards, don't use an ampersand
"Clint Bennett, Ryan Rubin, Peter Myles" does not sort correctly

— RunningTiger123 (talk) 17:55, 13 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@RunningTiger123: Done: I have read all your comments and have made corrections based off of them. I also found that the International Film Music Critics Association Awards were missing on the table and have added them onto it. If you could kindly maybe do a rewrite of the Andrea Risenborough section of the 95th Academy Awards since that is the next list I will be working on (submitting it for FLC on July 18, hopefully). I would greatly appreciate since you probably could handle such subject more objectively than I could. I will try to look over your nominations for Modern Family accolades list around Wednesday when I have more time.

--Birdienest81talk 09:25, 14 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Support – RunningTiger123 (talk) 21:44, 14 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

"At the 75th British Academy Film Awards, the film received eleven nominations and received five for" - think the words "awards" is missing after "five"
Think that's it! :-) -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 20:55, 14 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@ChrisTheDude: Done: I have read all your comments and have made corrections based off of them.

--Birdienest81talk 07:28, 15 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:34, 15 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Support for tidying up the list to an FL-esque one. Nice work! Chompy Ace 07:46, 15 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Source and image reviews – The photos each have an appropriate free license, caption and alt text, and the sources are well-formatted and reliable. The link-checker tool indicates that refs 66 and 86 gave it download errors, but I checked them manually and they seem to be working fine. Giants2008 (Talk) 21:44, 3 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Closing note: This candidate has been promoted, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FLC/ar, and leave the {{featured list candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Giants2008 (Talk) 22:17, 4 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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