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The list was promoted 07:02, 6 April 2008.

List of Rental Magica episodes

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This is a list of episodes of the Rental Magica anime. I believe it qualifies under the featured list criteria, as well as satisfying project-specific criteria such as WP:FICT. It is of similar or better status than similar anime episode lists such as List of The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya episodes, List of Kaze no Stigma episodes, and List of Gunslinger Girl episodes. The episode summaries are not excessive in length, and other relevant information is covered. Sephiroth BCR (Converse) 10:06, 24 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from The Rambling Man (talk · contribs)

Sorry I can't do a really thorough job right now but a quick skim revealed a few MOS issues...

  • Image caption in the lead is a fragment so remove the full stop.
  • Check WP:CITE, this sentence "... on December 21, 2007,[5], January 25, 2008.[6], February 22, 2008,[7]..." seems to have gone placement/punctuation crazy in the middle!
  • Avoid links in the bold part of the lead per WP:LEAD#Bold title.

I'll check the synopses later, but a quick read didn't pick out anything significant. The Rambling Man (talk) 11:16, 24 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

  • Can "produced by the Japanese animation studio ZEXCS and Victor Entertainment, which produced the animation and music respectively." be reworded?
  • Done.
  • It's only March 24 now, so how is it known that the last episode has/will be shown on the other channels mentioned?
  • I see nothing to show that they won't air then.
  • I don't know if it's covered by WP:FUTURE though.
  • *Shrug* The statement as it stands is true - the episodes do air later on those networks and have so far.
  • Are Japanese episode lists usually sortable?
  • No, the only reason for them being sortable is the nonlinear airing order. It's supposed to be an oddball feature for this particular anime.
  • Why is the Title and airdate column sub divided?
  • "the first episode broadcasted is the seventh episode chronologically." Is that chronological to the storyline, or when it was produced? If it's the latter, I'd actually say "produced".
  • It's the former.

That's it for now -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 02:57, 25 March, 2008 02:57, 25 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Support. Good list, meets criteria and Wiki guidelines/policies. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 19:28, 27 March, 2008

  • Comment: what's the source for the episodes chronological airing, and information available as to why it is being seemingly aired out of order? What order are they put in on the DVDs. Not sure I like the sortable look, but the explanation for it seems reasonable. Collectonian (talk) 00:26, 6 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]
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