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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by User:The Rambling Man 15:48, 17 September 2008 [1].

List of Denver Nuggets head coaches

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Worked on this article in my sandbox then moved it. Added image for one of the coaches, though, he only coached the team for less than a year. followed the format for List of San Antonio Spurs head coaches which I had created a few months ago. --Gman124 talk 23:28, 5 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from SRX
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Resolved comments from Killervogel5

Comments from Killervogel5

  • "in anticipation of moving into the NBA"→"in anticipation of moving to the NBA"
checkY --Gman124 talk 05:15, 8 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The name Nuggets won, their new logo was a miner discovering an ABA ball." Two choices: either the comma needs to be changed to a semicolon, or remove the comment about the logo and merge the beginning into the previous sentence. The logo is trivial to the article anyway.
checkY --Gman124 talk 05:15, 8 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • "In 1976, the ABA folded, and the NBA decided to admit four ABA teams into the league, with the Nuggets being one of them, along with the San Antonio Spurs, the Indiana Pacers and the New York Nets."→"In 1976, the ABA folded, and the NBA decided to admit four ABA teams into the league, including the Nuggets, the San Antonio Spurs, the Indiana Pacers and the New York Nets."
checkY --Gman124 talk 05:15, 8 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Since this team originally starts with a different name, it should be made very clear in the lead that you are referring to the history of the franchise, not just this incarnation of the team. Examples: "There have been 19 head coaches for the Nuggets franchise."
checkY --Gman124 talk 16:56, 8 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The team's first head coach was Bob Bass, who led the team to the division semifinals in which they lost to the New Orleans Buccaneers."→"The team's first head coach was Bob Bass, who led the team to the division semifinals, losing to the New Orleans Buccaneers."
checkY --Gman124 talk 16:56, 8 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • "the NBA Coach of the Year award for the 1987–88 season."
checkY --Gman124 talk 16:56, 8 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Larry Brown is the only member of the franchise that has been inducted into the Basketball Hall of Fame as a coach."→"Larry Brown is the only Nuggets coach to be inducted into the Basketball Hall of Fame as a coach."
checkY Gman124 talk 16:56, 8 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • "In 1976 Brown coached the Nuggets to the team's only ABA championship game." - comma after 1976.
checkY --Gman124 talk 16:56, 8 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Brown, Issel, Hanzlik, and Evans have played and coached for the Celtics." - completely irrelevant to the article. Remove.
checkY --Gman124 talk 16:56, 8 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • "As of June 2008 the current coach of the Nuggets is George Karl." - comma after 2008.
checkY --Gman124 talk 16:56, 8 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Footnote 1: "Thus" should be followed by a comma.
checkY --Gman124 talk 16:56, 8 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Use consistent formatting. Either use "W-L%" without a space or "W-L %" with a space; I prefer the former.
checkY --Gman124 talk 16:56, 8 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • References should be to "Basketball Reference" as the publisher, not to "basketball-reference.com". Also, "National Basketball Association," not NBA.com.
checkY --Gman124 talk 16:56, 8 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Change the reference titles so they match the actual titles of the webpages they link to. Example: "Doug Moe's Coaching Record" links to "Doug Moe Coaching Record."
checkY --Gman124 talk 16:56, 8 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • No reason for the Spurs coaches template at the bottom of this article.
checkY added the nuggets' coach template in place--Gman124 talk 05:15, 8 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The Denver Nuggets are a basketball team that currently plays for the National Basketball Association (NBA) franchise."→"The Denver Nuggets are a basketball team that currently play in the National Basketball Association (NBA)."
checkY --Gman124 talk 05:15, 8 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
This change was not made. KV5 • Squawk box • Fight on! 12:06, 15 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry about that, I have fixed it now. --Gman124 talk 12:41, 15 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Review by Killervogel5
Much better. Support from Killervogel5

Comments - sources look okay. Links checked out with the link checker tool. Ealdgyth - Talk 13:21, 8 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

  • Comments
    • Could expand the first paragraph.
    • Bernie Bickerstaff coached from 1995–97, and then Dick Motta coached from 1996–97. If Bickerstaff coached till 1997, shouldn't Motta's term start at 1997, not 1996? You need more of an explaination, I'll tell you.
I fixed the error.—Chris! ct 22:38, 13 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

-- K. Annoyomous24[c] 20:15, 13 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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