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The list was promoted by Giants2008 10:01, 27 May 2013 (UTC) [1].[reply]

List of Code Geass: Lelouch of the Rebellion episodes edit

List of Code Geass: Lelouch of the Rebellion episodes (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)

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Nominator(s): DragonZero (Talk · Contribs) 03:12, 23 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

The last featured anime list was List of Buso Renkin episodes. I want to see if this list can reach FL status. Even if it doesn't, criticism will help improve the article. DragonZero (Talk · Contribs) 03:12, 23 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

  • Support - A well-written list, satisfies the FL criteria. Lord Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 03:25, 23 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comment - It isn't necessary to use {{nihongo}} since the main article uses, is it? And is necessary to italicize Code Geass: Lelouch of the Rebellion in the lead. Gabriel Yuji (talk) 04:34, 25 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
The Nihongo was a preference. Yeah, it's a title so it has to be italicized. DragonZero (Talk · Contribs) 09:55, 25 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support - It's very good in all subjects. Gabriel Yuji (talk) 01:29, 29 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support - A good list. All references appear to be reliable and are well formattted.Tintor2 (talk) 13:04, 16 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from Giants2008 (Talk) 19:09, 21 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Comments –
  • I'm not convinced that a DVD cover can be justified by WP:NFCC. We don't need the image to understand the list, after all.
Yeah I guess. I could remove it. The logo is probably of importance and the art just represents the art style of the episodes. I would like your opinion if it should be removed, its image should be replaced, or if I can somehow satisfy NFCC. DragonZero (Talk · Contribs) 01:44, 19 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The episodes use five theme music". Feels like it's missing something before "theme", because the sentence isn't grammatical the way it is now.
"uses five pieces of"
Should be "use" after "episodes". Giants2008 (Talk) 21:25, 18 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Done.
  • Episode 3: "Having reason to suspect his mother's death, Marianne vi Britannia, was planned by one of his relatives". Order would be more logical with "to suspect that the death of his mother, Marianne vi Britannia, was planned...".
Done
  • "is the voice who lead them in the previous battle...". "lead" → "led"?
Done
  • Episode 7: "Shortly" should be decapitalized, as should "The" after the semi-colon later on.
Done
  • Episode 11: "amongst" → "among"?
Done
  • "forcing him to eject and crash-lands near Shirley. Shirley...". Try not to have the name repeat from one sentence to another like this.
Second Shirley replaced with She.
  • Episode 24: "The Black Knights are able to push the Britannian Army back and uses Ashford Academy as their headquarters." "uses" → "use".
Done
  • Other English releases: "In Australia, Madman Entertainment released a DVD collection was released...". Last two words should be taken out.
Done
  • Stage 9.33: "The girls fight over Lelouch and concludes with Milly demanding him to choose a girlfriend." "concludes" → "conclude"?
Done
  • Stage 22.25: "and the media cuts all broadcast." I think the last word should be plural. Giants2008 (Talk) 21:39, 17 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Not sure about this but I took your suggestion. Thanks for the review. DragonZero (Talk · Contribs) 00:14, 18 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 10:25, 26 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
  • "into 9 volumes" nine.
Done
  • "into 2 DVD " two.
Done
  • What's UMD format?
Replaced first UMD with Universal Media Disc
  • "a week before" -> "a week earlier"?
Done
  • "was done by " don't like "done", reads clumsily.
Replaced done with produced
  • Media tables need to comply with WP:ACCESS (i.e. MOS:DTT for row and col scopes).

The Rambling Man (talk) 16:18, 21 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I'm unclear about this, but do you mean I should add scope so rows and columns are clearer in the syntax? DragonZero (Talk · Contribs) 20:36, 21 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Yes. The Rambling Man (talk) 20:38, 21 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Added scope="column" in the media release tables. DragonZero (Talk · Contribs) 20:53, 21 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Also added rows which slipped my mind. DragonZero (Talk · Contribs) 07:00, 25 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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