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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by Giants2008 19:12, 10 May 2011 [1].

Latin Grammy Award for Best Male Pop Vocal Album edit

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Nominator(s): Jaespinoza (talk) 00:51, 19 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because it is part of the Grammy WikiProject and I will try to take the Latin Grammy lists to featured status. This is a well referenced list, with images and an expanded lead section. Thanks to all the reviewers for your hard work. Jaespinoza (talk) 00:51, 19 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 13:10, 26 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
  • "Latin recording artists, in the United States" is the comma needed here?
  • "Award-winning albums have been performed by Spanish artists..." seems a little odd way of putting it, perhaps "Spanish artists have won the award more times than any other nationality"?
  • "Spanish singer-songwriter Alejandro Sanz " introduce him as Span. s-s the first time you talk about him and then just refer to him as Sanz the second time you mention him.
  • "Performing artist(s)" no need for the (s).
  • Mark Anthony is a dab link.
  • Ref 8 could use an en-dash rather than two hyphens.
  • Don't like leading zeros in the dates, e.g. September 08, 2010. Humans don't need that leading zero to read the date, in fact most of us don't want it at all.

The Rambling Man (talk) 17:58, 25 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from Adabow (talk · contribs) 06:20, 1 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
*Comments
  • The image captions are a bit awkward. The first could be better written as a full sentence. The others (XYZ winner in [year]) is gramatically awkward. How about "XYZ won the award in [year] for [album]" or "[year] winner XYZ"?
FIXED. Jaespinoza (talk) 00:25, 30 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
FIXED. Jaespinoza (talk) 00:25, 30 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • "recordings of the pop genre by a male performer" → recordings of the pop genre by male performers
FIXED. Jaespinoza (talk) 00:25, 30 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Adabow (talk · contribs) 03:04, 29 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks. Jaespinoza (talk) 00:25, 30 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comment – Publishers in references 5 and 7 should be italicized, since they're both newspapers. Giants2008 (27 and counting) 15:29, 30 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
FIXED! --Jaespinoza (talk) 17:18, 2 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support, assuming other reviewers' concerns have been (and are) addressed. List looks good, lead is appropriate, correct table and reference formatting, etc. --Another Believer (Talk) 16:18, 4 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support a quick revisit shows no glaring issues from my point of view. Good work. The Rambling Man (talk) 15:08, 9 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
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