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The list was promoted by Giants2008 00:11, 19 January 2013 [1].

Latin Grammy Award for Best Long Form Music Video edit

Featured list candidates/Latin Grammy Award for Best Long Form Music Video/archive1

Nominator(s): ΛΧΣ²¹ and — Statυs (talk, contribs), 04:19, 19 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

The Latin Grammy Award for Best Long Form Music Video is an honor presented annually at the Latin Grammy Awards, a ceremony that recognizes excellence and creates a wider awareness of cultural diversity and contributions of Latin recording artists in the United States and internationally. According to the category description guide for the 13th Latin Grammy Awards, the award is reserved for video albums consisting of more than one song or track and is awarded to artists and/or video directors or producers of at least 51% of the total playing time. ΛΧΣ²¹ and Statυs (talk), 04:19, 19 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 10:37, 25 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

"the award would only be given" -> "the award is presented only to the ..."
"is the only country holding more than one award" -> "is the only country with more than one award"
Strange indentation of nominees in the 2006 row.
"Simone - Ao Vivo" I believe that should be an en-dash.
Any reason why Shakira isn't linked?
Or Enrique Bunbury?
Or any of the nominated works for 2012?
Cigala is Spanish but Bebo appears to be Cuban.

The Rambling Man (talk) 13:04, 24 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed all but one. I don't see any strange indentation. Are you using Chrome? — ΛΧΣ²¹ 22:44, 24 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

No Safari, it looks like the first set of bullet points are one "tab" to the left.... The Rambling Man (talk) 22:47, 24 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Weird. It doesn't show on Firefox. Let me check the code again... — ΛΧΣ²¹ 22:55, 24 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Okay. I think I got it. Chek please :) — ΛΧΣ²¹ 22:56, 24 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Bingo! Happy Xmas! The Rambling Man (talk) 23:07, 24 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Yay! Happy Xmas for you too :) — ΛΧΣ²¹ 23:13, 24 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Support. I went through the list 2 times and I couldn't find any additional issues that should be addressed. Good job guys! — Tomíca^(T2ME) 22:42, 24 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from —WP:PENGUIN · ^{[ TALK ]} 01:26, 26 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comments – great list, a few comments...

Diction: I think "promotes" would be a better choice here than "creates": "... a ceremony that recognizes excellence and creates a wider awareness of cultural diversity and contributions of Latin recording artists in the United States and internationally."
Redundancy: "...the award is ~~reserved~~ for video albums consisting of more than one song or track..."
Conjunctions: "...artists and/or video directors or producers..." → "...artists, video directors and/or producers..."?
Italicization: MTV Unplugged should be in italics.
Typo: "...and Venezuela is the only is the only country with more than one award winner..."
That's really all. But if possible, a more diverse selection of sources would have been nice. But either way, it's fine since this is how all Grammy FLs are sourced. —WP:PENGUIN · ^{[ TALK ]} 15:46, 25 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Done. Thanks for your comments! — Statυs (talk, contribs) 21:55, 25 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  - No worries. Aren't notes 1 and 2 a bit obvious? Do we need them? —WP:PENGUIN · ^{[ TALK ]} 22:47, 25 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    - They are standard in this type of articles, I guess. — ΛΧΣ²¹ 00:27, 26 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]
One more thing: "Showing only the nationality(ies) of the performing artist(s)," shouldn't have a period. It's not a sentence. —WP:PENGUIN · ^{[ TALK ]} 01:11, 26 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Done. — ΛΧΣ²¹ 01:14, 26 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Support – a bit on the short side, but a solid job. —WP:PENGUIN · ^{[ TALK ]} 01:26, 26 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comment – ref 5 needs to include the parameter |format=PDF NapHit (talk) 10:38, 28 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Done. — ΛΧΣ²¹ 18:41, 29 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comment With only 7 entries, I am not sure how it meets criterion 3, as it can be easily merged into an article discussing the short and long form music videos. Regards.--Tomcat (7) 17:59, 1 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- "criterion 3" GA? Assuming you were talking about the comprehensiveness criteria, of course it meets such. — ΛΧΣ²¹ 18:18, 1 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  - First of all, why are you linking to GA criteria on a FLC? Additionally, those are two different given awards, so no, they will not, and can not be merged. — Statυs (talk, contribs) 21:45, 3 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from Jaespinoza (talk) 01:48, 9 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

*A quick comment, at the 2006 LGA's a tie was declared and the award was shared by Cafe Tacvba and Bebo & Cigala, even your references for that year show that joint win, you should reword the lead and adjust the table. Otherwise, a good job. Jaespinoza (talk) 20:26, 3 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

OMG How the hell I missed that? I will fix today. — ΛΧΣ²¹ 21:05, 3 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed. — ΛΧΣ²¹ 00:17, 6 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I still think that the lead should be updated (about the tie), and you should link the Veloso, Gil and Sangalo articles in the 2012 nominees section. Jaespinoza (talk) 19:45, 6 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I have adjusted the lead (It wasn't easy). — Statυs (talk, contribs) 20:19, 6 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I think the lead should be adjusted in the part where you mention that Venezuela is the only country with two winners, now that the table shows Cafe Tacuba and Venegas from Mexico as winners, that country also has two winners. The table should link Caetano Veloso, Gilberto Gil & Ivete Sangalo articles, as well as Mil y Un Historias en Vivo by Franco De Vita. Jaespinoza (talk) 18:47, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Further comments: You also should link the following articles: Simone Bittencourt de Oliveira (Simone), Multishow ao Vivo: Ivete no Maracanã, Canciones Para Un Paraíso En Vivo, and Teatro (Draco Rosa album), and remove the link to Blue Cha Cha by Manuel Galban, because that article is for a movie, not the album. Jaespinoza (talk) 17:34, 8 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Done. — Statυs (talk, contribs) 01:14, 9 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Support. Jaespinoza (talk) 01:48, 9 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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