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The list was promoted by The Rambling Man 17:38, 18 April 2011 [1].

Latin Grammy Award for Best Female Pop Vocal Album

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Nominator(s): Jaespinoza (talk) 02:56, 2 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because it resembles previous work on the lists for Best New Artist and Producer of the Year, it is fully referenced and expanded to achieve this status. Thank you to all reviewers for your hard work. Jaespinoza (talk) 02:56, 2 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from ♫Greatorangepumpkin♫T 09:54, 15 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
*Comments
    • The award has been presented to singers originating from Canada, Colombia, Italy, Puerto Rico, Spain, and the United States; and was first presented to the Colombian singer-songwriter Shakira in 2000 for the song "Ojos Así".[3] — it doesn't make sense to put a semicolon; instead replace it with a comma.
Fixed. Jaespinoza (talk) 19:53, 2 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I disagree with this suggestion. IMHO two separate sentences would work better. Edge3 (talk) 20:15, 10 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed. Jaespinoza (talk) 21:30, 12 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks Edge3 (talk) 00:18, 13 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed. Jaespinoza (talk) 20:03, 2 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]


Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 15:21, 4 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
  • "From 2002 to date it has ..." not keen on this, particularly as you've already called it this in the lead opening sentence.
Fixed. Jaespinoza (talk) 02:43, 4 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The award has been presented to ... and was first presented ..." repetitive.
Fixed. Jaespinoza (talk) 02:43, 4 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • "for her album Fijación Oral Vol. 1, " don't think you need "her album" as it's clear this list is all about the albums.
Fixed. Jaespinoza (talk) 02:43, 4 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Be consistent on Aguilera's first name spelling...
Fixed. Jaespinoza (talk) 02:43, 4 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • "is the most awarded singer " a slightly odd way of putting it in my opinion. Maybe, "has received the most awards"
Fixed. Jaespinoza (talk) 02:43, 4 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • "American singer Christina Aguilera winner in 2001" some punctuation here would be good, maybe a comma after her surname.
Fixed. Jaespinoza (talk) 02:43, 4 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Same for Furtado's caption.
Fixed. Jaespinoza (talk) 02:43, 4 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Associated Press has no "The".
Fixed. Jaespinoza (talk) 02:43, 4 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Ref 17, no leading 0 needed on the date.
Fixed. Jaespinoza (talk) 02:43, 4 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

The Rambling Man (talk) 17:13, 3 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Comments –

  • "Spanish singer Rosario Flores hold the record for most nominations with five". "hold" → "holds".
Fixed. Jaespinoza (talk) 02:39, 15 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Please double-check the name of Ms. Aguilera in the table. Last time I checked her first name had nine letters including an h.
Fixed. Jaespinoza (talk) 02:39, 15 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
-) Giants2008 (27 and counting) 01:33, 13 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

  • "Since its inception, the award category has had several name changes. In 2000 the award was known as Female Pop Vocal Performance. The following year it was awarded as Female Pop Vocal Album, and starting from 2002, it has been presented as Best Female Pop Vocal Album." -- What is the source for this statement?
Fixed. Jaespinoza (talk) 06:14, 12 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • " Most recently the award was given to Canadian performer Nelly Furtado with her album Mi Plan." -- Per WP:DATED, please replace "Most recently" with "In 2010"
Fixed. Jaespinoza (talk) 01:10, 12 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Edge3 (talk) 20:15, 10 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

There's another comment above which you haven't addressed. It's located amidst GreatOrangePumpkin's feedback Edge3 (talk) 17:35, 12 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I just saw it, but I did not find that redirect. Jaespinoza (talk) 21:27, 12 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
It is resolved. Jaespinoza (talk) 16:57, 15 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Indeed it is... I'm not inclined to give a declaration of support or opposition unless I have examined the whole article. (I haven't done so) Edge3 (talk) 20:06, 15 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Support Edge3 (talk) 04:24, 17 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comments
  • The lead seems to be sprinkled with random winners. We have the opening winner (Shakira) and her other win (fine), and then Christina Auguilera. Why is her win notable? Slapped onto the end of the lead is Nelly Furtado's win. Illogical place, and not especially notable.
I tried to mentionate the most winners possible. I also named Laura Pausini as the most awarded singer, Rosario Flores (two-time winner, and most nominated), Christina Aguilera, Shakira and Nelly Furtado. Do I need to add Kany Garcia and Olga Tañón? Jaespinoza (talk) 20:54, 18 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I think you should remove Aguilera and Furtado.
Yes I could, but is there any particular reason to do it? Since there is also a Latin Grammy Award for Pop Album by a Duo or Group that I could include. Jaespinoza (talk) 20:54, 18 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, include both. Adabow (talk · contribs) 21:12, 18 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Can I still do it? This list is already listed as featured. Jaespinoza (talk) 21:16, 18 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed, I included both. Jaespinoza (talk) 21:20, 18 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Adabow (talk · contribs) 08:31, 17 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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