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Kerala State Film Award for Best Actor edit

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Nominator(s): Charles Turing (talk) 16:16, 9 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

The Kerala State Film Award for Best Actor is the most prestigious award given in the Malayalam film industry of the South Indian state of Kerala in India. The award is part of the annual Kerala State Film Award instituted by the Government of Kerala since 1969. This is my second nomination for the same. Unfortunately, the previous one was failed without considerable attention or reviews. --Charles Turing (talk) 16:16, 9 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

  • Support: Having carefully examined the article, I can say that it has my support and hope it passes the FLC this time. Kailash29792 (talk) 17:38, 9 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Kailash. Thanks for the comment and support. --Charles Turing (talk) 18:43, 9 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from Yashthepunisher (talk) 05:40, 15 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from Yashthepunisher
  • Delink India from the lead, per WP:OVERLINK.
  • Malayalam film industry --> Malayalam cinema.
  • Living Media India Limited --> Living Media.
  • "..and a cash prize that amounts to ₹100,000 (US$1,500)." Remove 'that amounts to' and replace it with 'of'.
  • Mention the release date of Charlie in the lead.
  • Provide better alt text for the Images.
  • Dulquer Salmaan's Image is redundant, we shouldn't have his Image just because he is the latest recipient.
  • I think only the use of yellow colour will suffice, we don't need *.

Yashthepunisher (talk) 04:52, 13 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Yashthepunisher: Thanks for the review. All correction done, except the last one which I have a doubt. The code is not working without * or any other symbol. I have replaced it with a † anyway. Hope I met your suggestions. --Charles Turing (talk) 20:07, 14 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks.--Charles Turing (talk) 14:41, 15 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Overall a great read, though there are way too many instances with the word "award"; I even misread some words in the lead because of that. – jona ✉ 23:16, 20 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
@AJona1992: Reworded some of it. Is it okay now ? --Charles Turing (talk) 19:34, 22 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
The article now flows and reads better and I support its nomination. If you're not too busy, I have a FLC of my own that could use some comments; though you don't have to comment at all if you wish not to. Best – jona ✉ 20:48, 22 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks. I wish to, but I am totally unfit for a review. Good luck on your FL. --Charles Turing (talk) 12:31, 23 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from —Vensatry (talk)
Comments from Vensatry
  • Is there a relevant link available for Department of Cultural Affairs?
    • I originally meant to Wikify the thing in lead. Seems like we don't have a relevant article here. Not an issue anyway. —Vensatry (talk) 03:28, 7 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • What does 'Minister for Cinema' even mean?
    • Minister for Forests, Sports and Cinema it is. —Vensatry (talk) 03:28, 7 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • "the Government of Kerala has presented a total of 49 Best Actor awards to 29 different actors" It's 27 actors, from my count.
  • Is any info available about the revision of prize money throughout the years?
  • "Several actors have won the honour for more than one film in a given year; as of 2015, the only actor to have won the prize in consecutive years is Bharath Gopi" I'd suggest you to remove the semicolon and split this as two separate sentences as they are not even remotely connected.
  • Em dashes shouldn't be spaced per MOS:MDASH.
  • In the table: In case of an actor winning the award for multiple films, why is that they are listed in as many rows? It should be a single entry with films separated by commas.
  • You have a location parameter in ref #3 but not in others.
  • What makes Malayalachalachithram.com a reliable source?
    • Not a convincing response really. Who are these people? Critics, notable filmmakers, or experts? —Vensatry (talk) 03:28, 7 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Date needed for ref #8.

—Vensatry (talk) 12:16, 4 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

  • Yes, Department of Cultural Affairs. Added it to External links.
  • In Kerala ministry, there is a post called "Cinema minister" or "Minister for Cinema". Govt of Kerala treat cinema as a department like forest, health, sports etc. Current minister is A. K. Balan,[2] before him was Thiruvanchoor Radhakrishnan,[3] and K. B. Ganesh Kumar before him.[4].
  • Corrected to 27.
  • Nothing about revision.
  • Removed semicolon.
  • Em dash corrected.
  • Single entry is good, but I think there is no problem with the rows either. Both are same but given in a different layout.
  • Corrected ref #3.
  • The site is supervised by a team of 21 convincing that its not a scraper from any other sites. In fact, it's more detailed than IMDb or similar sites. They have done good research.
  • Corrected ref #8.
@Vensatry: Thanks for the review. --Charles Turing (talk) 17:47, 5 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
@Vensatry: Corrected the rows as suggested. Removed the reference from Malayalachalachithram. The state jury only cite it as "Various films" anyway. Thanks again Vensatry. --Charles Turing (talk) 08:38, 7 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Correct the link for Pallavi. —Vensatry (talk) 12:12, 7 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Source review

—Vensatry (talk) 12:12, 7 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Vensatry: Ref #5 corrected. Chidambaram is there (3rd paragraph, 5th line). Thanks.--Charles Turing (talk) 13:41, 7 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support – Much improved since the previous nomination. —Vensatry (talk) 17:24, 7 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the review and support. --Charles Turing (talk) 18:22, 7 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
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