Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Def Leppard discography/archive1

The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was not promoted by User:The Rambling Man 16:08, 29 July 2008 [1].

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Def Leppard discography

Well sources and all references links to the right pages. --Be Black Hole Sun (talk) 14:02, 29 July 2008 (UTC)

• Comments (part 1, text)

• "In the twenty-first centaury Def Leppard has released three studio album's entitled X, Yeah!, and Songs from the Sparkle Lounge which have been fairly successful commercially."

• "...fairly successful commercially." –Where? How? When? Cannibaloki 14:24, 29 July 2008 (UTC)

•  Done --Be Black Hole Sun (talk) 14:40, 29 July 2008 (UTC)

• "Def Leppard was formed in 1977 by vocalist Joe Elliott. (and then?)

• Comments (part 2, tables)

• All tables need be re-structured, and mainly correct the alignment.
• Peak chart positions, include a caption like: for excessive unnecessary chart positions, is only possible to see this table using a magnifying glass.
• "Singles", all did charts?

• "Elected" (live) is a single only or non-album single?

• "Videography"? is not "Videos"?
• "Music videos" song titles, needs a correct capitalization.

Cannibaloki 14:58, 29 July 2008 (UTC)

• Comments - please please get these lists peer-reviewed and checked by a native English speaker before bringing them to FLC for the same old comments...
  • "3 compilation albums, 1 extended plays (EP) - 3->three, 1->one, one extended plays->one extended play.
  • 8 videos -> eight videos...
  • 8 videos what? 8 video albums according to the infobox.
  • " entitled The Def Leppard E.P..[1]" - lose the extra full stop.
  • "The band follow up" - what?
  • You've linked United States four times and United Kingdom twice n two paragraphs in the lead.
  • "would be their big breaktrough album and the album would later sell more then ten million copies in the United States alone." - would? it's past now - why not "was their big breakthrough album.." and don't repeat album again in the next part of the sentence.
  • "After touring for the support for Pyromania the band released" - what does this mean?
  • There are far too many errors just in the lead for this list to stay at FLC. I'm quick-failing it and suggest you take it, first to get it copyedited and secondly to peer review before bringing it back here. There are basic issues with spelling and grammar, there are problems with WP:MOS and this process (FLC) is not designed as an "all-in-one no-stop-shop" for extensive peer review. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:06, 29 July 2008 (UTC)

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