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DHL Fastest Lap Award edit

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Nominator(s): MWright96 (talk) 13:14, 11 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

This list, the DHL Fastest Lap Award, is an addendum to the List of Formula One drivers who set a fastest lap. The award is presented to the driver who sets the most fastest laps over the course of a Formula One season through a separate point system. I have recently redone the list and believe it meets the necessary criteria to become a featured list. MWright96 (talk) 13:14, 11 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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  • "the driver with the most fastest laps" - I know this is technically correct, but "most fastest" just reads weirdly to me, like a little kid saying something is "the most bestest" :-) Maybe change it to "the highest number of fastest laps"
  • "there is a countback, of those who are tied the driver" - I would simply say "there is a countback and the driver"
  • "the most second-fastest laps" - again I think "the highest number of" would work better
  • In the table, what does the "won" column actually mean? Does it mean the race by which the driver had obtained an unassailable lead in terms of the number of fastest laps? Or something else? Whatever it means, I think it needs to be made clearer via a note above the table.
  • That's it from me..... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:34, 12 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I only noted two things:

  • "Tiebreak" could be replaced with "tiebreaker". I have never heard that word used before, but it may be F1 semantics.
  • It would be great if you could add a lede image of the trophy itself. You should be able to get through fair-use, but then again copyright is always a complicated pain.
    • There are no suitable fair use images of the trophy at this moment. MWright96 (talk) 12:57, 16 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Otherwise it's a really good article. Nice job. ~ HAL333 21:32, 14 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

  • Support I've sorted out the minor issues I found myself with this edit [2]. Cowlibob (talk) 21:56, 6 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Source review - pass edit

Doing now. Aza24 (talk) 01:33, 14 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

  • Not sure about this, maybe ref 1 could have a "date" from the last updated date on the site?
  • Date missing for ref 7
  • Ref 25 missing author
  • Would rather see Sky Sports linked in all the publishers, not just the first
  • Everything else is formatting consistently and reliable, fix these things and easy pass. Aza24 (talk) 01:40, 14 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
  • "The DHL Fastest Lap Award is given annually by the courier and Formula One global partner and logistics provider DHL..." I'd replace the first and it that sentence with a comma instead
  • "DHL, the trophy's official naming patron,[3] first awarded it in 2007." I'd change this to 'First awarded in 2007 by DHL, the trophy's official naming patron, and then include the next sentence as part of this one.

That's all from me. NapHit (talk) 11:49, 14 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Support Great work! NapHit (talk) 13:09, 14 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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