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Bocchi the Rock! discography

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Bocchi the Rock! discography (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)

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Nominator(s): Harushiga (talk) 16:10, 9 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Here's something different from my past FLCs: this is about the discography...of an anime series! Bocchi the Rock! is one of the most popular anime of 2022, which led to its song album selling over 100,000 physical copies and all of its songs appearing in music charts in Japan. This is my fourth nomination, and any feedback would be appreciated as always! Harushiga (talk) 16:10, 9 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

DBC

@MPGuy2824: Done. Harushiga (talk) 13:33, 17 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Tintor2

Sorry for the delay. I'm not good with music articles but I'll see if I can help:

  • Shouldn't the first sentence make more heavy emphasis on the discography rather than the origins? "The discography of the anime Bocchi the Rock!...."
Done.
  • I'm not sure about the wp:lead in FLs but shouldn't every sentence be referenced? At least you could generalize some parts to avoid referencing specific parts.
Per MOS:CITELEAD, information that is sourced within the body no longer needs citations when mentioned in the lead, which is the case here. I've only sourced those that are not found in the body, such as the voice actresses and to verify that "Seishun Complex" is the opening of the anime.
  • "Watashi Dake Yūrei" Shouldn't you include a nihongo format?
Unless it's for the very first sentence in the lead, I find that Japanese titles in prose kind of disrupts the flow of sentences. That is why I added nihongo templates in the tables rather than the lead.
  • The body is well formatted. I'm not sure if Japanese titles need a "lit." for the translations though.
The translations are also the official English titles so the "lit." is not necessary.

That's all. Good work with the article. I hope it becomes FL. Ping me once everything is done. @Harushiga: Tintor2 (talk) 21:02, 3 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Tintor2: Hi, I've addressed your comments above. Harushiga (talk) 13:19, 4 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Good work. I leave my support. In order to attract more feedback I recommend exchanges like reviewing other articles. I would ask you to Review Musashi Miyamoto (Vagabond) since it was recently nominated by me or Frieren nominated by another user.

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The only thing I have is......

  • "A live album recorded from the Kessoku Band Live: Kōsei concert debuted at number one on the Oricon Digital Albums Chart" - is there a source for the fact that it entered at number one? The table shows that it peaked at number one, but that's not necessarily the same thing -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 14:30, 5 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@ChrisTheDude: Added a source for the debut position. Harushiga (talk) 23:58, 5 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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  • Wouldn't it be better to rename the chart headings to match those of the charts, like "Oricon Weekly Charts" and "Billboard Japan Hot 100" instead of "Japan Digital" and "Japan Hot"? Lunar-akaunto／talk 13:53, 15 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    "JPN Dig." and "JPN Hot" are the standard headings I've seen used in the discographies of Japanese and also South Korean artists. They're also abbreviated to avoid making the columns too wide. Harushiga (talk) 14:41, 15 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Oh, I see. I only said so because renaming would allow you to include the "Heatseekers Songs" chart in the table instead of the footnote. But nevermind, it's fine if you think so. Lunar-akaunto／talk 15:53, 15 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • Okay, one more thing. Though this appears to be the norm in many articles I have come across, I think ""—" denotes single that did not chart." is not really needed; readers would by default understand that a dash indicates singles that did not chart, especially when you have already explained the same in the footnotes. Lunar-akaunto／talk 15:55, 15 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    "readers would by default understand that a dash indicates singles that did not chart" is a bit of an assumption. Not everyone would have the same interpretation of the dash, so it's better to have a note that defines it. It's also possible that a reader would not read the footnotes and not see what the dash means, therefore the "'—' denotes single that did not chart." statement would serve as the alternative way of relaying the definition. Harushiga (talk) 14:19, 16 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • Okay, one last thing, I think it'd be alright to add the rōmaji for titles like "青春コンプレックス—Seishun Kompurekkusu" , "Flashbacker—Furasshu Bakkā" etc. Lunar-akaunto／talk 15:39, 16 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Added. Harushiga (talk) 16:24, 16 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Apologies if my above comments were not so helpful to the article. This is my first time participating in a discussion like this, and those were the only things that caught my attention. Lunar-akaunto／talk 17:16, 16 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • Source and image reviews – Formatting and reliability of the sources both look okay from what I can tell, and the link-checker isn't picking up any issues. The only image in the article is a logo that is public domain as it is composed of simple shapes. Giants2008 (Talk) 21:17, 18 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Promoting. --PresN 16:50, 19 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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