Wikipedia:Featured article review/Dartmouth College/archive1

The following is an archived discussion of a featured article review. Please do not modify it. Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at Wikipedia talk:Featured article review. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was delisted by Nikkimaria via FACBot (talk) 3:24, 22 May 2021 (UTC) [1].

Dartmouth College

Notified: Kane5187, ElKevbo, Esrever, Contributor321, Hal333, WP New Hampshire, WP Dartmouth, WP Higher Education, talk page notice 2020-11-30

Review section

This is a 2007 FA that has not been maintained to FA standards, and that has not been improved since the talk page notice six months ago. Issues include poor image layout, out of control galleries, listiness and single-sentence paragraphs, citation overkill, incomplete citations, dated information, uncited text, inadequate use of summary style (especially noticeable in the alumni section), and the lead reads as promotional rather than a summary of the article. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 18:50, 25 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from HAL333

Images lack alt text.
The largest problem is the near complete reliance on primary sources published by Dartmouth.
Most, if not all, of the citations in the lede should be removed per WP:LEADCITE.

Those are the most glaring big picture issues I see. ~ HAL333 21:34, 25 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Move to FARC - no engagement. Hog Farm _Talk 20:57, 6 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Move to FARC Agree with Hog Farm. ~ HAL333 23:54, 7 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

FARC section

Issues raised in the review section include sourcing, organization and coverage. Nikkimaria (talk) 03:33, 8 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Delist Lots of issues with sourcing. None have been addressed. ~ HAL333 01:23, 12 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Delist - lots of work needed; basically no engagement. Hog Farm _Talk 03:00, 14 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Delist, significant unaddressed issues. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 23:58, 21 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Closing note: This removal candidate has been delisted, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please leave the {{featured article review}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Nikkimaria (talk) 03:24, 22 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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