Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Sydney Boys High School/archive2

This page has undergone quite a bit of renovation and comprehensively describes one of sydney's premiere boys public schools.

Object. Too damn short. If it weren't for the extensive list of former students, I'd list it for deletion. --Carnildo 05:51, 23 October 2005 (UTC)[reply]
Object per Carnildo. Please refer to the path to a featured article, and take this through peer review. I note that this is the second time this has been in FAC, and the earlier recommendation for peer review was apparently not followed. I'd highly recommend you follow that advice before you list this on FAC again. Also, please make sure to sign your name using ~~~~ henceforth. PacknCanes | say something! 06:19, 23 October 2005 (UTC)[reply]
Object per above responses. The article is long on lists and short on prose. *Exeunt* Ganymead ^Dialogue? 06:36, 23 October 2005 (UTC)[reply]
Object. Too short - not enough on history or current sports. Doesnt mention controversies in Rugby over the past two years or performance in HSC. --AMorris (talk)●(contribs) 06:38, 23 October 2005 (UTC)[reply]
Please remove from this list before it causes yet more embarrassment. Tony 17:00, 23 October 2005 (UTC)[reply]
Look at Caulfield Grammar School, a featured article, or other articles at Portal:Schools for some inspiration on how to improve. Drop me a line on my talk page for any help wanted. Harro5 10:04, 24 October 2005 (UTC)[reply]
Object. Details, details, details! -64.231.70.46 20:45, 24 October 2005 (UTC)[reply]
Object. As above. Enochlau 20:52, 25 October 2005 (UTC)[reply]

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