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Nature fakers controversy edit
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The article was promoted by Karanacs 17:14, 11 May 2010 [1].
Hello, my name is Maria, and... well, this is hard to say, but I'll come out with it: I'm a Nature Faker. Yes, although I may appear to value verifiability over sheer emotion, I see the natural world through rose-tinted glasses. How else can I explain my love of a precious little bear cub who befriends an old curmudgeon of a bruin after the death of his mother (The Grizzly King), a domesticated dog who nonetheless hears the call to reach his full potential as an alpha-wolf (The Call of the Wild), and especially a fearless and clever wolf who is finally captured by hunters only after he is driven reckless and heartbroken over the death of his mate ("Lobo the King of Currumpaw"). Know and love these stories? Then you may be a nature faker yourself; or else, John Burroughs and Theodore Roosevelt would have considered you one of their ilk.
The Nature fakers controversy is a quirky literary debate that, although largely forgotten today, nonetheless remains absolutely fascinating. I created the article out of a redirect last summer, and have been expanding it steadily over the past month. It was promoted to GA several weeks ago, and also received a Peer Review. As always, any and all comments are welcome. On a side-note, if promoted this article will mark my tenth DYK/GA/FA! :) María (habla conmigo) 16:37, 3 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- Comment—no dab links or dead external links. Ucucha 16:53, 3 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- Support I just peer reviewed this yesterday and thought it clearly already met the FA criteria then. I found a few nitpicks in the PR, all of which were corrected.
On looking the article over again just now I noticed that some names are linked in both the captions and the text, while others are linked only in the text. I would be fine with linking in both places, but think it should be done consistently in either case.An interesting read and very well done, Ruhrfisch ><>°° 17:21, 3 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Minor comments, partial support
- The article gives Burroughs' play on the title as "Wild Animals I ALONE Have Known", while the Atlantic itself gives "Wild Animals I Alone Have Known" (which could probably be "Wild Animals I Alone Have Known" in the article).
- "Roosevelt sent him a letter of support as well as an invitation to travel West in each other's company."—use "travel west"?
I guess there might be more nitpicks if I look really hard; otherwise, I really like this article. It looks very well put together, consistent dashes, etc. It assumes little (which is good, because I simply wasn't aware of this controversy pre-article :sadface:), and explains the background nicely and succinctly. The images, from the info given anyway, appear to check out (I love Kloss's notes on File:Theodore Roosevelt by John Singer Sargent, 1903.jpg btw)—check Google etc. further if that's a concern. I don't full-support articles for which I can't (or won't) access most of the sources, but what I see looks great, so I guess I support on all but 1b and 1c. --an odd name 17:47, 3 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks for the comments, an odd name. I've made the two corrections you suggested ("Alone" and "west"), and I can vouch for three out of four of the illustrations, as I clipped them from Google Books myself and uploaded them to Commons; each publication was made prior to 1923. I'm glad you like the article. :) María (habla conmigo) 18:02, 3 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- Support Really good read, I made these edits please check that you're happy with them. Note that oriole goes to our orioles, whereas the new link goes to your unrelated but similar-looking birds. Jimfbleak - talk to me? 19:02, 3 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- Comment Interesting and nicely-written article, but I was left wondering where the balance of current scientific opinion on the instinct/training question lay? Hard to do without Synthesis perhaps, but was not Burroughs rather overstating the role of instinct for higher animals by modern standards? Johnbod (talk) 11:38, 4 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- He definitely was; he was so resolute that instinct was responsible for pretty much any behavior displayed by a wild animal -- despite what he had previously written in his career, even -- but the trouble is is that we still don't know exactly what the balance is with learned behavior vs. instinctual. At least, that's what I gather -- this is really not my area of expertise. :) I had a line thrown in at the end of the article stating that scientists still debate the issue, but it was sourced to Lutts, whose book is twenty years old. The other sources I've used touch upon the literary aftermath rather than the scientific, so I'm not sure what to do. Any ideas? María (habla conmigo) 12:17, 4 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Support - Nice read. Although I was aware of Roosevelt's involvement, I didn't know the background to the controversy. Sorry, but I can't find any nitpicks for you to work on. Truthkeeper88 (talk) 13:04, 7 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- Image review? SandyGeorgia (Talk) 18:38, 9 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Sources comments
The link in Ref 86 confirms the existence of the two films you mention, but gives no information whereby we can verify that "Animation pioneer John R. Bray also showcased this new definition of 'nature faker'", or that the two films satirize Roosevelt's involvement in the controversy.
Otherwise, references all look OK, no further issues. Brianboulton (talk) 16:31, 10 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
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