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Your submission at Articles for creation: Kim Loo Sisters (July 14)

Latest comment: 4 years ago2 comments1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Calliopejen1 were:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of music-related topics). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

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Calliopejen1 (talk) 04:27, 14 July 2020 (UTC)Reply

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Kim Loo Sisters (August 15)

Latest comment: 4 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by MapleSoy was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Thanks for creating this article. The sisters are notable, but it is still unclear where a lot of the information from the article is coming from; is it original research? Is it from the book? Additional in-line references would help verify this information. (You can reuse the same sources more than once.) I've found some additional references that I'll leave on the talk page. They can be incorporated into the article if you'd like.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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MapleSoy (talk) 04:29, 15 August 2020 (UTC)Reply

{{Reply to: Maple Soy}} Maple Soy additional references

Latest comment: 4 years ago2 comments2 people in discussion

Hi Maple Soy,

I hope you receive this message. You mentioned leaving additional references in the Talk Page but I seem to have missed them. May I request for them again?

I am also am working on in-line citations and I am using the same reference throughout the article (which I was informed is acceptable)---should I use "Ibid" in the Author Name and Date or should I list each detail for each citation, varying only at the Kindle Location # (page #)?

Thank you!

Zmdrecidoro (talk) 18:53, 5 October 2020 (UTC)Reply

Hi, just a note that you accidentally wrote {{Reply to: Maple Soy}} with a colon, but you'd need to use {{Reply to|Maple Soy}} to make the template work.

I've moved your article to mainspace as the subject is notable, but it would be quite helpful if were made more clear which parts are sourced like MapleSoy pointed out, and if unsourced items were removed. It would also be ideal, of course, if more reliable, independent sources were added.

See you around :) – Thjarkur (talk) 20:10, 5 October 2020 (UTC)Reply

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