User talk:TwilligToves/Archive

Welcome!

Hello, TwilligToves, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are some pages that you might find helpful:

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I hope you enjoy editing here and being a Wikipedian! Please sign your name on talk pages using four tildes (~~~~); this will automatically produce your name and the date. If you need help, check out Wikipedia:Questions, ask me on my talk page, or place {{helpme}} on your talk page and ask your question there. Again, welcome!  Bawolff 06:25, 29 January 2007 (UTC)

Also, you may be intreasted in the wikinews: project (seperate from wikipedia). Bawolff 06:25, 29 January 2007 (UTC)

your welcome for the welcome. Don't hesitate to ask if you need any help with anything. Happy editing. Bawolff 06:29, 29 January 2007 (UTC)

Wow you are the first person I think I've ever welcomed whose actually became an active member of wikipedia [not including other wikimedia projects/wikinews]. I guess that's because I mostly welcome people who I see vandalize stuff, and I don't really expect that they're going to be constructive. Its nice to see such an active new contributor. Keep up the good work. Bawolff 08:11, 10 February 2007 (UTC)

Copy-editing

Glad to see yet another "wordnerd" on Wikipedia :) Journalists provide succinctness, which is what we need. You've probably found that Wikipedia's ideal writing style is very similar to that of journalism. — Deckiller 07:09, 29 January 2007 (UTC)

An award

		The Exceptional Newcomer Award
		For the "Articles ready for final proofread" section of this, amazing levels of copyediting in a short time. James086Talk 08:47, 1 February 2007 (UTC)

Doing a great job, keep it up! James086^Talk 08:47, 1 February 2007 (UTC)

I agree. Well done! - Itsfullofstars 11:33, 1 February 2007 (UTC)

Here here! — Deckiller 07:06, 2 February 2007 (UTC)

Thanks all! BuddingJournalist 07:18, 2 February 2007 (UTC)

A.J. Wright

Hey, can you take a quick read through A.J. Wright? I think it might need a bit of a polish (not to mention an update when I get around to it). Thanks. — Deckiller 07:06, 2 February 2007 (UTC)

Thanks a lot for that. BTW, I've been plowing through the proofreads. — Deckiller 07:33, 2 February 2007 (UTC)

My welcome

Thank you very much for the welcome! Hope to see more of you around the wiki Import007 08:13, 2 February 2007 (UTC)

Cad Operator

Don't be offended but I've reverted a couple of well-intentioned but erroneous edits you made to the article Cad Operator. You altered "despatch" to "dispatch" throughout; whilst this is the correct American-English spelling, "despatch" is the correct spelling in this context as it forms part of the title of a (British) software package. I've also reverted your changing of "active duties" to "street patrols" - these are most definitely not the same thing! (At any time the Met has around 15,000 officers on active duties, of which at most 1000 - and usually no more than 100-200 - will be on street patrols.)

I've left your {{unsourced}} marker in place as it's technically accurate. However, I only recently separated this article out of its parent article, Metcall, and all relevant citations are there; in addition, all facts are drawn from the MPS documents listed in the References section. Iridescenti 15:15, 2 February 2007 (UTC)

asian american ce tag reply on my talk page

thanks! --Lukobe 17:55, 2 February 2007 (UTC)

Request

Dear BuddingJournalist,

Do you have the time to take a look at Activism at Ohio Wesleyan University. It is a short article and an easy read. I would like somebody, better than me in copyediting, to take a look at it and improve the prose and issues that might exist. Thank you so much! I appreciate it! LaSaltarella 19:37, 3 February 2007 (UTC)

• Thank you for starting copyediting the Activism at Ohio Wesleyan University page. I appreciate it. LaSaltarella 02:35, 6 February 2007 (UTC)

Katie Blair

Hi... apologies for that... I didn't catch the word "adequately" when I re-added it. I've changed the wording of the whole sentence... the important point was that Blairs was the only question with an answer that was either correct or incorrect as the others were asked to give opinions on issues. I've changed the wording. -- PageantUpdater • talk | contribs | esperanza 21:02, 5 February 2007 (UTC)

Break time?

Hi. Would you like to help me concentrate on clearing out the "ready for final proofread" list so we can focus on the backlog? — Deckiller 05:46, 7 February 2007 (UTC)

Yeah, that's what I meant :) — Deckiller 05:52, 7 February 2007 (UTC)

Fort William

Thanks for your copy edit and clean up of Fort William. It has a decent look now. Regards. -- P.K.Niyogi 17:10, 7 February 2007 (UTC)

League of Copyeditors

Glad to be of help. Just say the word as to how and when. Outlook 14:35, 8 February 2007 (UTC)

Your message: League of Copyeditors

Hi there! I came across your edits and noticed that you do a fair amount of copy-editing. I'm a member of the League of Copyeditors, a project dedicated to managing the sizable backlog of articles needing a copy-edit. We're always looking for new members, and you'd make a great addition to the project! We've started a participation drive for the remainder of February. If you're interested, you can help clear the backlog by adopting the following goals each week: Select an article to copy-edit from the backlog. After your copy-edit, list the article in the ready for final proofread section. Select a different article to proofread from the ready for final proofread section. Thanks, and happy editing! BuddingJournalist 13:31, 8 February 2007 (UTC)

League of Copyeditors

Ahha! Yes, you've already explained what to do. My question: how do I best navigate to the "ready for final proofread section"? Do you keep it as a bookmark or is there an easier way? Outlook 14:45, 8 February 2007 (UTC)

LoCE Template

Thank you so much for your work on the template. The "someone" who forgot to code the date so it displays was me--well, I didn't "forget", I just didn't know how. :o) Glad to see it looking a little more polished. Galena11 15:12, 8 February 2007 (UTC)

removing copyedit tag?

At what point should the copyedit tags be removed? Outlook 16:05, 8 February 2007 (UTC)

WP:LoCE membership

Hi, Budding Journalist. I read your invitation to me about the League of copyeditors and I must regretfully decline. I do support the direction of the project, but I have too much on my plate right now to take on another wikiproject. If it is any consolation, I'd be happy to be a sort of unofficial ally to the project (perhaps I'll make a few edits here and there). I'd also be happy to answer any questions you have (although you seem to be pretty wiki-savvy already!). Anyway, you're off to an awesome start here, and I hope you stick around for awhile, because the project needs more editors like you. Cheers, The ikiroid (talk·desk·Advise me) 19:56, 8 February 2007 (UTC)

LoCE

I must also decline. I spend most of my spare wiki-time in the Category:Cleanup_by_month, which has a backlog reaching back more than a year. Kerowyn ^{Leave a note} 23:31, 8 February 2007 (UTC)

Heart of Eternity Diamond

The alternation between "Heart of Eternity" and "Blue diamond" is confusing. Can you address this? It's dizzying reading one and then the other. Rintrah 08:29, 13 February 2007 (UTC)

Yes, sorry. I come to expect confusing variation in wikipedia articles; so I thought they referred to the diamond. Mea culpa. Rintrah 08:39, 13 February 2007 (UTC)

I think many of Fowler's ideas are outdated, but I agree with the entry on Elegant variation. I'm not really a fan of journalism. Hehe — reverse order! I think variation is valid, but not for the purpose of avoiding repetition. I think better writing should do that. My position seems to be in the minority, though. :( Rintrah 08:47, 13 February 2007 (UTC)

Sorry, that might have sounded rude. I didn't mean it that way. Rintrah 08:56, 13 February 2007 (UTC)

I went a different direction. I used to use the thesaurus heavily, but now I rarely, if ever, use it. Rintrah 09:09, 13 February 2007 (UTC)

Re thesauribus

In answer to your question: yes, "thesauri". "thesuarus" is a Greek-borrowing in Latin, hence "thesauri". But "thesuaruses" is also valid, albeit less lofty. In Latin and Greek, the word means "treaure, treasury". Rintrah 12:31, 13 February 2007 (UTC)

Re: Kudos!

Thanks for the kind words! Thank you for all your copy-editing, it makes Wikipedia such an easy to read place! - Zephyris _Talk 14:05, 13 February 2007 (UTC)

Bishop of Thatcher's War Playground—I mean, the Falkland Islands

I am confused by this sentence: "Bishop of the Falkland Islands is a bishopric in the Church of England, originally the ordinary of the Diocese of the Falkland Islands. Contents."—First, what does everything following the comma mean? And second, what is its syntactic relation to the rest of the sentence?

As you can see, I couldn't get past the first sentence.

By the way, my father, a British citizen, was in the Falkland islands during the Falklands war. He actually encountered Argentian troops, who treated him rather well, despite their initial suspicions. He couldn't get over how patriotic the Argentinians were, but when he came to England, he found the citizens there were worse. Rintrah 07:40, 14 February 2007 (UTC)

Re Hand of Goal Controversy

If you asked me brother, you would probably get a diatribe. I was rather amused Maradona got away with it, but the incident was long before my time.

I was upset about a match not long ago between the Socceroos and Italy in the World Cup finals, which Italy won because an Italian player took a dive in the last minute. He suddenly lost balance because he saw a Socceroos defender in front of him on the ground. So, with just enough time to plan a dive, he slowly walked into the Socceroos player and leaned forward, and lo! He fell forward, making a dramatic dive and grinning afterward. Italy successfully converted the penalty. Later, Italy won the World Cup—those spaghetti-eating bastards. Rintrah 08:03, 14 February 2007 (UTC)

Re Quote

Answer: Eddie Izzard

5. Strategic Sheep

So after World War II, the whole world was going, "Come on, Europe, give these countries back. Come on, we just had a bloody war; let's give 'em back. Britain?"
"Wha'?"
"What's that behind your back?"
"Oh, it's India and a number of other countries."
"Give 'em back."
"Oh, all right. There's that one there, and there's that one…”
“Falkland Islands?”
“Oh, we need the Falkland Islands... for strategic sheep purposes!"

Rintrah 08:37, 14 February 2007 (UTC)

Errors

I was trying to get through many articles and I hadn't eaten, hence the many errors. As for your question, in non-American English groups should be consistently called either "they" or "it" and not used interchangably.

Sorry for the errors. Rintrah 10:58, 14 February 2007 (UTC)

Kakapo

Hi; I've been a little tied up. Could you give Kakapo a copy-edit pass today? That would be great. Thanks! — Deckiller 10:44, 16 February 2007 (UTC)

Thanks; I'll try to give it a finished look when I have the chance. — Deckiller 05:07, 17 February 2007 (UTC)

Barnstar

Thank you very much, not only for your appreciation of my translations, but for the expansions you made to the articles and for recommending them to DYK. I look forward to working further with you in the future and definitely hope to see more of your thriving contributions. Best, Defrosted 09:01, 8 March 2007 (UTC)

DYK

On 10 March, 2007, Did you know? was updated with a fact from the article Wa-Wan Press, which you created or substantially expanded. If you know of another interesting fact from a recently created article, then please suggest it on the "Did you know?" talk page.

--Carabinieri 15:09, 10 March 2007 (UTC)

Trembling before G-d

Heya, I believe someone has worked on your suggestions at the Trembling FAC. Would you mind reviewing your comments? Even if they haven't been followed up on, I'd like to know so I can do it myself. Dev920 (Have a nice day!) 18:13, 10 March 2007 (UTC)

All done, want to take a look? Dev920 (Have a nice day!) 16:35, 13 March 2007 (UTC)

Character count - DYK

Hi there. I note your comments when Jreferee indicates a character count over 1500 on a DYK nomination. I think you'll find that he is only letting other editors know the count and not suggesting that the nom is short. Cheers. --VS ^talk 01:07, 11 March 2007 (UTC)

Jāzeps Vītols on DYK for 11 March 2007

Did you know? was updated. On 11 March, 2007, a fact from the article Jāzeps Vītols, which you recently nominated, has been featured in that section on the Main Page. If you know of another interesting fact from a recently created article, then please suggest it on the "Did you know?" talk page.

Thank you for the nomination! — ERcheck (talk) 05:56, 11 March 2007 (UTC)

William Clowes Ltd. and Woodstock of physics on DYK for 11 March 2007

On 11 March, 2007, Did you know? was updated with a fact from the article William Clowes Ltd., which you created or substantially expanded. If you know of another interesting fact from a recently created article, then please suggest it on the "Did you know?" talk page.

On 11 March, 2007, Did you know? was updated with a fact from the article Woodstock of physics, which you created or substantially expanded. If you know of another interesting fact from a recently created article, then please suggest it on the "Did you know?" talk page.

Thank you for your contributions! — ERcheck (talk) 06:00, 11 March 2007 (UTC)

Heinz Tiessen on DYK for 11 March 2007

Did you know? was updated. On 11 March, 2007, a fact from the article Heinz Tiessen, which you recently nominated, has been featured in that section on the Main Page. If you know of another interesting fact from a recently created article, then please suggest it on the "Did you know?" talk page.

Thank you for the nomination. — ERcheck (talk) 21:16, 11 March 2007 (UTC)

DYK

On 12 March, 2007, Did you know? was updated with a fact from the article Paul Secon, which you created or substantially expanded. If you know of another interesting fact from a recently created article, then please suggest it on the "Did you know?" talk page.

--ALoan (Talk) 14:16, 12 March 2007 (UTC)

Did you know? was updated. On 12 March, 2007, a fact from the article Erdene Zuu monastery, which you recently nominated, has been featured in that section on the Main Page. If you know of another interesting fact from a recently created article, then please suggest it on the "Did you know?" talk page.

--ALoan (Talk) 14:18, 12 March 2007 (UTC)

Did you know? was updated. On 14 March, 2007, a fact from the article Italian submarine Barbarigo, which you recently nominated, has been featured in that section on the Main Page. If you know of another interesting fact from a recently created article, then please suggest it on the "Did you know?" talk page.

Re:DYK arranging

Oops. I thought that referred to the order of the sections rather than the DYKs themselves, but now I see that there isn't really much order in the earlier dates either… Thanks for telling me though, otherwise I would probably have wasted a lot more time rearranging them. --Grimhelm 07:41, 13 March 2007 (UTC)

Wikipedia:WikiProject Vandalism studies/Obama article study

Thanks for this. Hoping you will consider extending the study to include the Barack Obama article's current experiment with unprotection which (at least so far) looks encouraging. Here's something I did that might yield a few more ideas. My snap hypothesis after reviewing this sample: We are dealing mainly with badly behaved children at play (editing in the early evening, after school, mostly from small town, USA)... play is how children learn best, and encyclopedias are for learning. So what do we teach? In this line of thinking I think maximum openness is a smart investment in the future. --HailFire 18:08, 14 March 2007 (UTC)

DYK

Did you know? was updated. On 14 March, 2007, a fact from the article Angela Carder, which you recently nominated, has been featured in that section on the Main Page. If you know of another interesting fact from a recently created article, then please suggest it on the "Did you know?" talk page.

--BigHaz - Schreit mich an 22:06, 14 March 2007 (UTC)

DYK

Did you know? was updated. On 15 March, 2007, a fact from the article Richard Steiff, which you recently nominated, has been featured in that section on the Main Page. If you know of another interesting fact from a recently created article, then please suggest it on the "Did you know?" talk page.

--ALoan (Talk) 14:45, 15 March 2007 (UTC)

LoCE copyedit progress template

Are you still involved with the LoCE? I haven't seen you around there in a while. I wanted to make an update to the to the progress template (I wanted to append the graph to display copyedited but not proofread counts too), but I didn't want to do anything without talking to you first as it was your creation. Also, there has been a bit of talk about me creating a bot to automatically update the template, but again, I wanted to get your input before proceeding. What do you think? —Daniel Vandersluis^(talk) 14:33, 16 March 2007 (UTC)

Did you know

On 16 March, 2007, Did you know? was updated with a fact from the article Ralph Greene, which you created or substantially expanded. If you know of another interesting fact from a recently created article, then please suggest it on the "Did you know?" talk page.

--howcheng {chat} 00:17, 17 March 2007 (UTC)

Vecoli

I have added a "{{prod}}" template to the article Vecoli, suggesting that it be deleted according to the proposed deletion process. All contributions are appreciated, but I don't believe it satisfies Wikipedia's criteria for inclusion, and I've explained why in the deletion notice (see also "What Wikipedia is not" and Wikipedia's deletion policy). You may contest the proposed deletion by removing the {{dated prod}} notice, but please explain why you disagree with the proposed deletion in your edit summary or on its talk page. Also, please consider improving the article to address the issues raised. Even though removing the deletion notice will prevent deletion through the proposed deletion process, the article may still be deleted if it matches any of the speedy deletion criteria or it can be sent to Articles for Deletion, where it may be deleted if consensus to delete is reached. Black Falcon 00:27, 10 April 2007 (UTC)

please check

The article about maurice benayoun has been rewritten. Could you please check if tags are still relevant? I wouldn't dare remove them.81.64.53.102 20:26, 11 July 2007 (UTC)

Kent FAC

Hi. I'm sorry to bother you, but as a LoCE member, I just wondered if you would be willing to have a look through the Kent article. It is currently a Featured Article Candidate and needs a copy-edit for grammar by someone who hasn't yet seen it. Any other ways to improve the article would also be welcome. Thank you very much, if you can. Epbr123 20:59, 12 July 2007 (UTC)