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Assignment 9 edit
I can't see where you've made any contribution to the Peak experience article since Nov. 6. To make up lost points on Assignment 9, add 100 meaningful words to the main article. You can also edit, add citations, and remove the banner to make up points. J.R. Council (talk) 19:52, 5 December 2014 (UTC)
- I'm surprised you haven't done anything. There's still time. Let me know if you need suggestions.J.R. Council (talk) 21:11, 11 December 2014 (UTC)
Dr. Council - I removed banners from the page, and I also think something that you didn't catch in your original grading for Assignment 9 was my addition of two body sentences to the History section on our article. I added "Maslow's assertions about peak experience, along with his famous hierarchy of needs, were widely celebrated due to the theories' focus on the psychology of healthy people, which stood out in a time where the bulk of psychology research focused on psychological disorders.[9]" and "In original peak experience research, Maslow utilized interviews and questionnaires to gather participants' testimonies of peak experience. These early studies suggested common triggers for peak experience included art, nature, sex, creative work, music, scientific knowledge, and introspection.[10]" The second of these required a new source, so that was some extra work too.
I really don't want to add too much more to the article, because it might make it less readable for the "general public" seeking to learn about our topic. SteveBaker93 (talk) 02:08, 12 December 2014 (UTC)