User talk:SimsBiologist45/Amynthas agrestis

Good Article! - First paragraph, last line, second sentence: change "development" to develop - Same sentence as above; Specify who they is. - Fix subheadings in the Article draft, they seem misplaced. ~~Annsli.Hilton

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Amynthas agrestis, the Asian jumping worm is a species of worm in the family Megascolecidae. They are described to have smooth, glossy grey or brown body with a milky white clitellum and can range 1.5 to 8 inches in length[1]. Amynthas agrestis are native to Japan and the Korean Peninsula, but they have been introduced to North America where they are an invasive species due to increased human activity during the 19th century. They are known to reproduce and development quicker [grammar] compared to their European counterparts[2]. Article body Ecology

The Amynthas agrestis became a problem in the United States, specifically the Southern United States during the 19th century. Many ecologists and landscapers have become increasingly concerned about this invasive species.[3] One of the main concerns is the over consumption of leaf litter, which will impact the microbial and species diversity of the native soil. Many of these scientist have created ways to control this invasive species. One of the main ways to control Amynthas agrestis is controlled burn in grassy fields and some forest. This method removes leaf litter, the main food source for Amynthas agrestis, which should thoroughly control the overall population of Asian worms[4]. 

Life cycle The Asian jumping worm follows an annual life cycle. At least six months out of the year, the Amynthas agrestis spends its time in the larva stage, then it emerges between the months of May and June[5].

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Overall you did a good job. You added a lot of good information to the article..Nice addition of an image and GREAT job with in text citations and links. Check your spelling and grammar. Your peer reviews have a few good suggestions as well. Whiteamphipod (talk) 16:24, 22 October 2021 (UTC)